Waaah it's so good! Please continueeee I beg you ;-;

Awwww, I love it!
Please new chapter
Thank you for writing

awww hiruma has a heart and the object of his affections has noticed
i hope it all works out

can you write a story about hirusena (spy/action/boduguard) tht the two of them have to become a patner...hehehe

I'm glad that this was in first person, because you perfectly captured Sena's thoughts and actions. I loved this :3

Hahahshdas! XDDD Its just fucking awesome. Sena's pov it's hilarious, so confused and bewildered and stuttered all the way, and you can just see the evilness of Hiruma in his view. And the kindness, kinda... Uhm, yeah, and it's overall so /them/, like, Hiruma being Hiruma -just like him to not ask for the shrimp's acceptance, to just shove the ring and not even pretending to give it, just shoving and putting it, and oh, well, I just plainly loved him. And so Sena-like to just accept everything his captain says and go with the flow and stay there wondering a lot of stuff while things just seem to happen to him.

So, ehm, thank you so much for the amazing fic! 3

Uuuh, poor little Sena, so confused! And for him to know, black roses are the epithome of possessiveness. So Hiruma-like. I really loved your story, 'd love if there was some sort of continuation, but like it is, it's awesome 'nuff. Thanks for creating and sharing it with us! 333

Very hilarious and entertaining. Lol.

sweet!

hope to read ur another hirusena work anyway hehe

Wow, this is a very good story. I've come to find that most stories that use the 1st person of a character actually lose the character as the story goes on, but I think you nailed this! I hope you write more! :D