| Reviews for The Heralds of the White God |
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THiaLieN chapter 21 . 8/13/2019 How I know a fict plot is good enough on it's own. I initially came for Kurofai and only searched for Kurofai moments or their storyline. But I find I didn't mind reading chapter where Fai doesn't mentioned at all and actually looking forward to details of this adventure. This is amazing, and also the part with Yuuko. Thanks for writing and sharing. |
Guest chapter 14 . 10/8/2018 Kuroganes skirmish here never fails to amuse me. How everyone gathers around expecting a show and ends up scattering to put out fires and beg them to stop fighting because someone is finally good enough to give kamui a run for his money haha And fei wong reed begins to show his true colors to sakura too And all of the magic users unite! To start singing rain rain go away! How excellent! |
Guest chapter 13 . 10/5/2018 Dhxgxhsjjsi I'd forgotten how good the fight against giant invisible spider was. And how great syaorans "failed lesson" was segueing into that encounter. And that moment of kuroganes realization at the end And how both fai and kuroganes parents are still working against him with everything that's in them, trying to get sakura to realize what's really going on |
Guest chapter 12 . 10/3/2018 Again everything is so so so so goooood |
Guest chapter 11 . 10/3/2018 Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (Don't have much time to read today so I'm gonna plunge into the next chapter instead of leaving a nice review here but just know this continues to be fab) |
Guest chapter 10 . 10/1/2018 And off they go! And off i go to the next chapter! |
Guest chapter 9 . 10/1/2018 What a great chapter! The aftermath is so intense! |
Guest chapter 8 . 10/1/2018 So much goodness wrapped up in a single chapter oh man. I don't remember how many times I've reread now but it still has me on the edge of my seat every time. They way you incorporated ashuras madness and fai putting him to sleep (plus valerias history)? Sakura getting caught up in the magics? So good And fai seeing syaoran on the stairs? Grabbing him and looking in his eye and demanding to know who he is? While syaoran has no clue what's going on but is realizing that there's something more to all this, something in him that he never suspected, that could explain so many things? "Too late" ringing out so loud and wordlessly as everything falls to pieces? Yessssssssssssss |
Guest chapter 7 . 10/1/2018 Zhdhfhduzuxusgxvxnwkz soooooo much happening i love it |
Guest chapter 6 . 9/29/2018 Yessssssssssssss I never thought I'd type this sentence but what excellent politics XD |
Guest chapter 5 . 9/29/2018 Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Still good always good All the explanations and politics and socialization and stuff starting to make sense to people |
Guest chapter 3 . 9/27/2018 Ahhhhhhhh ahahaha i love how no matter how much kurogane determines to keep his cool when getting into enemy territory and talking with nobility he just. Can only take so much bs from the people around him and he generally hit that limit within about 5 minutes. Amazing Also love yukito and sakura and all of the callbacks to kuroganes last visit as well as how much stuff in this chapter sets up what is to come |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/27/2018 I love the interactions of kurogane at court. They're so nuanced just because of the form of the thing that even though he's about the most straight forward character imaginable, there's a lot going on in a look and a posture and it's riveting Also oh syaoran XD |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2018 Aha! And so we have the fabulous beginning to /the rest of the adventure/! |
Chikaniwa chapter 21 . 2/11/2017 The whole Wizard of Cere series is just a masterpiece and it's really well thought out. Everyone is in character and they all played a role. Bonus points that Ashura and Fei Wong are not complete villains. There is an explanation and reason to their personality, actions, and goals. It's also amazing to see Yuuko isn't extremely powerful (god like), she had limits. |