This story is AWESOME! By far the best dialogue between characters and story line! This would make a GREAT MOVIE!

So, I enjoyed this until the possession and domination came into play. She has to change who she is and what she likes/loves because he is an immature and insecure wanker? Give me a break. And college? Really? She was living her life on her terms until the wanker came along. Once again, while it may appear that this version of Bella has a spine, she is still the pathetic, spineless twit that allows herself to be lead by others.

Thank you so much for sharing this unique story with us, I absolutely loved it.

Instead of being a first class ass hole maybe as old as he is he could learn to block the emotions coming his way . it is not Bella or the others fault that he has never tried to learn how to block or mute the emotions.
Do really wish you would have made it so the vamps could drink seeing that it is mostly water just like the blood plasma is 90% percent water if you didn't know.
I would rather she her at least do a half n half diet since she didn't have to suck Bambi like Jasper to save her there are more baddies out there then there are deer and since she isn't a Cullen they can't guilt her into going against her nature.

I wish when you did your rewrite that you would have made it that they could all drink since that would have made for some good times.
Also Jasper should have gone to have a "talk" with her prick of an ex and put the fear of the Major in him then the puppies would find out what it was like to go up against real vampires instead of Bambi eating losers.
Karma will catch up to him but it won't be him that pays for his bullshit though.

I understand that now they are married she doesn't need to work,but with him wanting her to quit because he is possessive and jealous is no different than what Eddie thought he could do if she was stupid enough to take him back.

If this was a real relationship the best thing she could do was leave the first chance she got ,divorce him and disappear to get away from her psycho husband.
Is this what some women want,their partner to treat them like an object something that they own?
Considering they are not in Forks or even Washington state they have no say over what gap between her and her mate. Since they really, at this time, have no reason to go to Forks they can shove the only real problem will be with her ass hole ex.

First off I’m not even trying to be Alice but I hope this is not your sense of style shorts with moccasins...you should know what’s a huge no no

Oh my gosh this has been great! I loved this badass Bella! And her powers were awesome! This story had the perfect combination of humor, suspense, and angst and was so intriguing! Thanks for such a great read! I can't wait to read the sequel!

I think I’ve read this story at least 8 times...it never gets old, and I always come back to it.

For a random find, this was highly entertaining and addicting! Couldn’t put it down honestlyGreat story!

Are you joking with the whole she cant talk shit because his pissed off! Uh jasper she was working there when you met her you cant expect her to leave just because you tell her to do so! And the whole college thing? really for christ sake why does every story have to be with them either in school or college! I'm not trying to criticize your story or your writing but it gets really frustrating sometimes like there is more to life then school or college and what about her son in all this? she does realise if Jake finds out he will stop sending her pictures?

Why the fuck is bella apologising for swearing and smoking? shes a grown up! esme isn't even her mum for crying out loud the woman abandoned her because Edward told her to! my mum abandoned me and my sisters did we fuck hug her the second she walked back into our lives! that shit doesn't go away it's been a year since she came back and were still pissed, hurt and damn right not forgiven her for it

Lmao Stella and Casper!

Ha! Love the Copper man!

This was a great read. Way to mix the humor with the adventure and angst. Can't wait to see what else you've got.