Nice! :)

It's amazing how you managed to describe Alec's feeling of loss and his pain. I often cry when reading something sad but after reading this I was so moved and I had such a big lump in my throat that I couldn't even cry. Great writing!

Beautiful.

You... God I think you just killed me. I'm sitting here reading this going 'Tissues? I'm sure that it won't make me -that- sad.' and now I'm crying my eyes out while my family stares at me wierdly. -.-'
This was just heartbreaking. Absolutly heartbreaking. And the lines you put in here... God,
'All those people… all those officials… all those interrogations and questions and those accusations that he was the one who could have done such a horrible thing, that he was the one that took Magnus Bane out of this world when he can't even imagine a world without him.'
'But half a heart can't keep someone alive.'
And so many other parts had me sobbing my eyes out. This was amazing and I hope you write more Malec in the future. :)

;3
TMTMFD

Wow... really really sad. You captured the emotion extremely well. :( that was so sad.

oh my god! im so broke by this, i love magnus so much, and he, he die...(no, please no!)

i dont know if you're one of the greatest writer for dare to kill him or just a soulless monster, i only know that this fic got all what it needs to be remarkable and left its print on my memory.

thanks for make me cry! you did it really good! -a sad, sad- Rei

That was sad, yet beautiful. Nicely done!

i hate hate hate hate hate you for killing off Mangus! In my world Alec dosen't die he becomes immortal just like Mangus. So i love it but i hate it if that makes any sense.

that was, so sad D:

I am CRYING! :( :) :(

This got me thinking, about Magnus and Alec's future. And I hate how some possibilities are so tragic and heartbreaking!

I was reading some of your other stories (the one-shots, mostly, which are all great, btw! I love them!), and, since most of them had happy endings, I was also expecting one for this story! I don't really pay attention to titles of stories... and now, it has come to bite me in the ass! DX I thought this was gonna be a sweet, sappy story portraying a really sweet, loving, sappy Magnus! I seriously wasn't expecting his death! :(( I try to avoid reading these kind of fics because I feel like they're too close to the truth (future of Malec in the books) for comfort. I don't want any of them to die... break up... move on from each other... :(( I want Magnus and Alec together! DX

BUT! Despite all that, I think this story is beautiful. :) You portrayed Magnus and Alec's love for each other here very well. I really felt it, and the loss... That was truly heartbreaking! I think I'd prefer this version over the one you had with Camille's. :)) It's more peaceful and serene, breaking Magnus' death more gently to the readers and minus the drama. I haven't really finished CA, so I don't really know the characters yet very well, but I hope Camille's character won't be hostile to Alec in COFA! Okay, I don't know if anything I said made sense, and to sum it up, all that I really needed to say is that this story is wonderful and beautifully written! X3

You fucking BITCH! Oh...I had no idea it was going to be that bad! Holy fuck! I'm crying right now! How could you fucking do this? That was horrible! Like, the worste experience of my life! *sniffs loudly and tries to stem the flow of tears* ...I need to go read some Malec smut...I'll deal with your later.

By the way...NEVER letting you near Magnus again.

*dabs tears* MAGNUS CAN'T DIE! Or can he? Anyway, that was awesome and depressing at the same time but who cares? Great job :)

its soooooo good and sooooo sad! i cried sooo much! my mum came past and she was like What? but it is really beautiful. :)

that was... awesome and heartbreaking...

really, good job...

Emily