liked this chapter...please keep going xx

oh that is sad. but i cant wait to read more

You are absolutely killing me here. It's bad enough that Fred's dead but the hurt and pain that both George and Hermione are going thru...

I'm so glad that Fred and Hermione shared with George that they were together. Maybe they can help each other out with their grieving.

Fred's poor family finding out about him and Hermione the way they did.

You have me in tears but I can't wait for more.

great start xx

I think you have a very good start here and I can't wait for more.

Fred is my favorite out of everyone and it still kills me everytime when he dies.

I was glad to see that he and Hermoine found happiness with each other, too bad it couldn't last.