I like this one!

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You have a really interesting concept, but I feel like I'm re reading Fairest. There's nothing extremely original about this. Every detail, the composing game, the duchess- It's all the same. And why are you naming the characters after old ones? I mean, Yarry? Arona? Audra? I'm just confused. There are also a lot of grammar mistakes that make this difficult to read. Try reading your writing out loud and you'll catch a lot of your mistakes. I really think this concept is interesting and you could do so much more with it.

Off to a very good start, but it is a bit overwhelming, as you have no dialogue and few details.
Try to space it out a bit.
But you have a wonderful writing style, and the idea and plot are wonderful.
So please, please update.

Very fast paced, but really interesting.

This story is cute :) In the future, when you're working on other stories, try to structure your chapters better. It's not difficult to get a little lost about what happens in between...

nice - i figured aza would be queen - PLEASEEEEE updatwe as theres only 3 stories for Fairest which i think is definitely NOT the fairest Dx

Good writing! Please continue!

Great start, but try adding more detail what

are Arona's ideas, personalty, what she sees and what how she

thinks about it. Anyhoo, awesome idea and keepit up! .

THis is a good chapter, i do wonder what the duchess was thinking while Arona was talking to the queen.

THis is really, supremely, awesomely AWESOME! i love fairest, and it's kinda funny how she follows the same path as Aza

I really like the start for this and keep writing and updating :) i might just write a fanfic about fairest too :)

I love this book :)

I think your off to a great start. I'd like to see where you go with this :)

I love the idea! :)

Hope you continue, I would like to see it.

This is off to a really great start! I can't wait for the rest! Please keep writing! :-)