This Edward is so pathetic and dishonorable. I can't read anymore. The look in his POV showed what type of person he is and it's not a good one.

I am curious as to why he is so cold to Bella but fuck him.

Honestly why make Edward a pathetic slut?

I wish you made him more honorable, instead he just seems like a coward that was stumbled upon a naive girl and stole her heart.

Why can't Edward be the amercian dude fallen for the foreign girl..

It gets a bit repetitive reading naive american girl falls for hot foreign dude...

This is good tho.

Aww...so Lovely. So happy to find this old lil gem. Thanks

Loved this story. Truly beautiful writing.

With tears streaming, I thank you for sharing this beautiful story! Love, love, loved it.

Beautiful...very beautiful! Your writing skills are amazing

That was a tough read!

Loved this! Terrific angst, but also the right amount. Thank you!

I absolutely loved this. Although it's 5 years since you wrote it I want you to know that people are still discovering your story and enjoying it so much.
It's very thought provoking, particularly at the moment with so much displacement going on in the world in which we live; so many children growing up as this Edward had, yet the majority of them will not be as lucky as he has here, even though he probably didn't realise it at the time. Yes...very thought provoking indeed. Love it :) xx

2nd time. Ur words feel so real . :)

Their's is a true love. Which entails, acceptance, patience, trust and honesty.

She must be a masochist?

Their past is what contributed to the men they are now.

I absolutely loved this multi-shot. I have rarely ever felt such powerful emotions as the ones that coursed through me while I read this story...really brilliant! Please do consider adding a couple more chapters, maybe highlighting Edward's past or a few on their future. Thank you!