I enjoyed it, even though it was rather cheesy at the end!

I think you're far to liberal with that "L" word...

I know Harry is knew at this dating thing... but double dates only work if everyone actually gets along with each other. And this Rachel girl is either an utter moron for going along with his stupidity or is just using him to be dating Harry Potter.

Well, this was probably the most reasonable of chapters. If you discount how he is suddenly so infatuated with this random girl he has met a grand total of one time.

I think you're misunderstanding "getting over something" with "being really good at hiding emotions". Anger was about the only emotion that Harry inadvertently let out during the series and that was generally chalked up to the horcrux in his head. I can see Ron trying to push him to date again because while he may have grown up, he never understood Harry. What I absolutely CANNOT see is Harry being willing to sleep with a girl that soon. He's spent his whole life staying away from fangirls and now he's gonna try and go all the way with 'a friend of Ginny's'... you know... his #1 fangirl? I get that you need plot points to make your story flow but try and make them believable. You're cramming all of this in far to small of a span of time. This should be taking place over months at minimum, not a couple of weeks.

While I agree that Harry wouldn't want to throw away his friendship with Hermione, life isn't perfect, it would definitely be damaged, not irreparable, but damaged for a while. He woke up from a 3 year coma and while I agree that it was OK for Hermione to try to move on, I absolutely cannot see her getting into a serious relationship so soon after she starts trying to move on. I'm not saying that she would immediately break it off with the scrub but I can see her doing everything she could to try and get him to understand her position. Harry would still be angry, I think the amount of stress would allow for that but sometimes just raging is the best way to let it out and calm down. Hermione wouldn't hold it against him and would likely understand.

I don't see Ron as being able to break the Black Manor wards. Or Harry agreeing to go on a blind date. I can accept that Ron may have grew up being with Luna but you are forcing your story way to fast for the sake of the story. Also him learning the piano is lame.

So... dude wakes up from a 3 year coma... and;
1) NOONE is in the hospital to know he woke up. Teh fuck kinga shit it that?
2) The Weasley's (Molly mostly) are completely fine with not sending his recently un-comaed ass back to said hospital for an eval.
3) Dumbledore offers aforementioned recent coma wakee a job that he has 15 days to prepare for after he's been in a coma for 3 years. Also doesn't send his ass to either Pomphrey or the hospital for an eval.
4) About the only logical thing happening is Harry lashing out at Hermione. Not personally happy about it but the fact remains it is a reasonable reaction for a person suddenly 3 years in the future.

Hey man/woman, please stop writing hhr stories, you will do great in canon pairings.

Did nobody think to ask Dumbledore his opinion on the matter and if it is true that harry was fighting of the soul piece wouldn't his magic be reacting to that also

Hermione said she would love harry forever so by loving Kyle now that's a lie and 6 months seems like a fast time for her to fall in love especially with the first guy she dated

I hated reading this. Hermione is a giant piece of hippogryph shit

Fuck you asshole. You really are a scumbag piece of garbage. All of your fics follow a certain "its Harry's fault Hermione did nothing wrong" formula. It really shows what a double standard sexist piece of shit you are.

worst story fully ooc

my unrequited love for you just increases after every word.

- Chapter 6

Dunno, feels totally unrealistic