No real sex but damn it was cute and lovely and shit, sooo romantic! Loved it

Loved it! Make a sequel!

KYA! SO CUTE!

you wrote this so in character i'm almost convinced it can happen just like this,even that doujin done by the authors themselves can't compara to this

That is SOOO cute!

I love the story, some mistakes, but overall it is wonderful. you are the first to provide description of jap. words :)

You made me cry. You made me CRY. Oh, god, this was beautiful. Thank you.

This is certainly the most well-written, in character fic I've read in the Tactics fandom. Though, I have to admit that at the end I was shouting "NO, WHY? WHY HAVE YOU DONE THIS TO ME!" because the sex scene was so hot and perfect and then... it just ended abruptly and they never got back to it. Other than my lone sad tears for the loss of great sex, fantastic job!

poor kanatarou

This story was amazing. The best fanfic I've read so far, even if your grammar did need some work and I was itching to edit it the whole way. When the story is this great though, I don't mind the little things _

I'm definitely going to see what else you've written soon as I send this.

hey, where is my lemony lemon? .

Great story! There just aren't enough for these two. I love you for this. TT-TT

Waah, this was really nice! Loved it whole, but especially loved the ending, it was too cute!

For not being beta'ed and English not being your first language, you're pretty good, wish I was half was good as you are!

But seriously, really really reaaally liked it, it had everything, it was quite interesting, the plot was well thought in my opinion, and the story itself was very fluid (dunno if you'll get what I mean haha)

Thanks for sharing, it was a great read w

Gusi~

O My GOODNESS! this is the most adorable thing EVER! i couldn't keep the grin off my face by the end of the story. 3

GAH! I loved it sadly i was praying for a lemon my wish was denied. WAHHHHHHHHHHHHH! well moving on really nicely written.