'he felt the urge to stay overtake the need to go.' If the rest of the fic were terrible it would still be worth it for that line, but the whole thing is good!

Very Sasuke that in the midst of something so dark he would see just for a second something good and comforting, then turn away from it. Always chooses the hard path that kid.

Wonderful piece!

Come back, you idiot! D: Just fall asleep and make some hot coco for the two of you in the morning. You'll feel all better, I promise.

Jokes aside, I really enjoyed reading this. I especially love how Sasuke actually reconsiders at the end. I like to think canon Sasuke was pretty uncertain too, even though he tried not to show it.

Hmmm...I do like. Enough of the smut to make it not entirely too sad, but enough of the angst to balance out the smut. An overall good story. :)

Kinky. How do you NOT have more reviews? Well, umm. Well-written and disturbingly hot. LOL You did a great job of playing off the readers' desire to keep Sasuke from leaving, thinking that this would give him a reason to stay, and...

I thought your dialogue was just right. Most people can't get it; they go overboard or something. So, great job. )

OH MY GOD! I LOVED IT!

This fanfic reminded me of a doujinishi called Ero Ero Ero. Everything here was almost exactly like it! I loved it a lot. I like how the snake had a little play time of its own

Anyway, it was really good. This is a good oneshot and I'll enjoy reading-watching-over and over again. Please continue to write such enjoyable stories.

-yaoi10

Dat was great! Sad ending :(

but super hot!

Beautiful, angsty, and new. Oh, why does Sasuke have to leave (I secretly hate him for that)? Nevermind, anyways, your story is amazing and I love it :3