| Reviews for Zenith: The Year Between |
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alixandria chapter 1 . 2/18/2017 I'm so ad... |
klarsen117 chapter 1 . 6/18/2015 Loved it. Except for the part where the baby's last name is Swan, lol |
ladeerelli chapter 1 . 9/25/2013 Still sad Jacob's gone. But what I wanted to say but forgot to on my review for Zenith, is that I love the way you portray Jacob. I had reread Eclipse awhile back and realized I didn't like SM's Jacob and was turned off to J/B stories. Your Jacob made me fall for him and that's why I was dissapointed he died. Anyhow, I appreciate the little snippets you've got here. |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2013 Why? Why do I keep torturing myself? This was absolutely lovely. Any chance there'll be a sequel? I would love to see Bella in 50 years or even a hundred. You know, this kinda reminds me of Infernal Devices. If you did a sequel with Bella and Edward reconnecting it could be the Jem/Clary/Will thing all over again. Thanks for a lovely story. At the moment it's the best new moon I've ever read and I'm including the actual novels. |
Nepenthe70 chapter 1 . 3/12/2012 Okay, that was a wonderful gap filler. I love Bella and Leah as best friends, and when I reviewed "Zenith" and said I wanted to see a sequel with Bella/Embry, I think I might have to change that to Bella/Seth. So cute...good god. |
mharrison9101 chapter 1 . 9/14/2011 Oh, I love this! It was so emotional. I actually teared up. I enjoyed reading this little missing piece. I didn't think of it as 'missing' before I actually read it, but now it definitely seems a necessary part of the whole story. Thanks! |
jace4ever chapter 1 . 9/7/2011 I am CRYING...After reading both of the Zeniths stories the tears will not stop rolling. The other story caused such grief. Didn't matter that he left a piece of him, HE was gone. But you wrote such a beautiful romance for them. I so believed he was the better choice for her, then the way Stephine made it. They were great books, but i must say I have a soft spot for the tall, dark, and lovable guys...Great work.. |
Ahmose Nefertari chapter 1 . 7/16/2011 I loved Zenith and this one-shot. Despite the magical elements that can easily turn the story into a juvenile fairy-tail, it wasn't. Can I suggest the theme to another one-shot? Maybe years in the future, with different situations where Bella already understands her powers. Maybe Edward could help her to be Buffy, since he's go nothing better to do with his eternity. I'm sure helping to save her would be his priority. And something with a vivid dream of Jacob, just like she used to have with Felicity. |
chele681 chapter 1 . 6/8/2011 This made me hurt and happy. |
justanemptyspace chapter 1 . 1/25/2011 Gosh... that was all wonderful. I cried! The part about Billy was heart wrenching. With Embry on the roof top was gutting, that Jacob was 'nowhere', tears even now, how utterly devestating. Talking to Jacob about their son like he was there, just beautiful. Loved every word of this :-) |
Varia chapter 1 . 12/20/2010 Swan? Why not give the baby the last name Black? Just because they aren't married the baby belongs to Jacob. |
AccountKiller6189 chapter 1 . 12/9/2010 I was totally about ready to cry while I was reading the scene with Billy and Bella and then Bella talking to Renee on the phone, but then I got to the scene of the dinner at the Clearwater's and started laughing. And Seth's letter was cute! I think Embry's gonna propose again.. in a hundred years.. Lol. Cause I seriously can't, won't and don't want to see Bella with Edward. xD Anyways, great.. uh.. snapshots(?)! Loved it! :D |
Tim C. Girl chapter 1 . 12/9/2010 *smirk* The THOUGHT of Embry and Seth argueing on who should propose to Bella... Yeah :) This wasn't necessary, in my opinion, for Zenith to be complete, but it was still very nice to read it :) Perfectly bittersweet. |
latetolove chapter 1 . 12/8/2010 I know I've already said this, but WOW! You are absolutely the best! Beautiful writing, beautiful thoughts, heart grabbing emotions and touching resolutions. Thanks for sharing your talent with the lucky people who get to read it. |
DrakesGirl09 chapter 1 . 12/8/2010 Great! I was hoping we'd get to see how Embry and Seth proposed! Embry's was sweet and touching, and Seth's was thoughtful and adorable. The whole story was amazing! I was completely satisfied with it. |