Thought you were spot on with Chuck and Sarah’s thoughts and feelings toward each other about the time of Fake Name. Clearly in love with each other but lost in the hurt anger and isolation of Chuck’s spy training. Really enjoyed Sarah opening up to Chuck and how they finally broke through the obstacles placed between them. Great action scenes and use of the Intersect. Looking forward to reading your sequel and the battle against Shaw. Thank you for sharing this.

Great story. Well done.

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Hmm. This end felt rushed. Not at all like the rest of the story. We have Sarah recover from her seeming serious injury, break up with Shaw, investigate Shaw, and finally have sex with Chuck all with just a few paragraphs, while also having the bombshell about the fail safe in the Intersect. It really could have used another chapter. At least for the lovin'! Ha. Still, overall this was a great story and I hope that the sequel gets finished someday so I can give it a go. Thanks.

What just happened? Damn it if Shaw didn't go and Manchurian Chuck. Traitorous bastard. And Sarah wounded and slipping fast. How the hell does this get wrapped up with one more chapter? Good stuff.

Solid effort.

Loved the Charah banter early. Liked the idea of flashing on lip reading. And ABSOLUTELY loved the reveal of Shaw as a POS. I always love the that.

Excellent. Most excellent. I thoroughly enjoyed their discussion of life in the espionage world. But more importantly- the three words. Nicely done. I love that Sarah's reveal to Chuck came in the midst of basically calling him an idiot. Good stuff.

Even though we've switched to Chucks POV I enjoyed this chapter. Sarah is really reaching back to her con girl days and she's not happy about it. Guilt about past transgressions or Chuck seeing that side of her?

Short chapter. Not much going on and Chuck POV. Transitional for sure. Thanks.

I really do enjoy that this story is heavily weighted towards Sarah's perspective. She is after all, the greatest fictional woman ever created. Your writing of her is smooth and your dialogue crisp. Bravo.

"He's still my Chuck."

'nuff said.

On the run. Nice. Nothing will bring two people together better than forced closeness while evading government assassins. This is an engaging story thus far.

Nicely done. Always enjoy Sarah's POV. And Chuck with his first kill. Just the icebreaker needed to thaw the freeze that was early to mid season three. Good stuff.

Hmm...a season three AU. I hope it fixes the crapfest. Good start for sure. Although I kinda wish it had picked up earlier in season 3. Lots of suck prior to Fake Name. Anyway, on with the show.