That was lovely, beautiful and wonderfully written. I am going to come back and reread it...soon.

Love it!

I like E & B's relationship. However, it suddenly seemed very rushed and hard to follow. My best guess is you were just ready for the story to be over.

Hey this was a great story! The only problem that I have is that Rosalie went from great to crazy I feel like we didn’t really need rose to be a bad character. But other than that it was great!

You need to proof read this or get a beta to do it for you. It was difficult to read with so many spelling errors and incorrect variations of words being used.

I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.

Glad they got their HEA.

Great

thanks for the re-post i don't know what was changed but i did enjoy it again ;D

This was interesting. I loved it. Would love to see more.

I’m confused because Rosalie was so nice and then all of a sudden evil hahaha what

Is it finished? Doesn't feel like you summed up your 16 chapters into one. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Wow, I had my doubts coming in but that was beautifully written. I just wish it had been longer and lived up to its M rating!

“sroties“

I enjoyed your story, however, I have always been more of a epov type reader. That doesn't mean I didn't enjoy the story, I really did. The story had a good flow to it but there were a few spots where I would have liked a little more detail. An example would be when Emmett and Rose split and it caused problems between him and Edward but nothing else was said about it. I would have liked more detail.