I quite like the story where it only comes to tell about BB and Mello. Your writing style is nice too.

You captured the spirit of BB and Mello beautifully- a big brotherly sort of relationship from Beyond, respect and admiration from our dearly loved and impulsive, Mello. Ooh, amazing! You did really great, no joke, I truely luved this! This is heart breaking, though!

*Sob, sobs*

~Luffles, Fairylust~

I LOVE THIS PAIR. Really i have to compliment you, by stepping inside his head and making him care for someone you gave bb a lot more depth than most authors do. You captured the spirit of BB and Mello beautifully- a big brotherly sort of fondness from b, respect and admiration from mello. Even if it isn't a pairing fic, i love how you showed such affection from b while still giving him a snarky inner voice. And i love your accurate medical situation, you really expressed the gravity of his burns!

I LOVE THIS PAIR. Really i have to compliment you, by stepping inside his head and making him care for someone you gave bb a lot more depth than most authors do. You captured the spirit of BB and Mello beautifully- a big brotherly sort of fondness from b, respect and admiration from mello. Even if it isn't a pairing fic, i love how you showed such affection from b while still giving him a snarky inner voice. And i love your accurate medical situation, you really expressed the gravity of his burns!

Oh god...this was heartbreaking.

Mnleh, I've never really thought of what Beyond would've been like after his incident..

Gwah, this was very good.

What? No more chapters? -insert sad emoticon-

The summary threw me off a bit because the wording was kind of awkward to read in my mind, but one doesn't usually see BxMello so I clicked. I'm very pleased to have done so. Normally I don't read past the first paragraph when it's first person because it's irritating and doesn't fit right with the character, but this had a certain... tone to it, I suppose I could say.

There is a hint of a friendship (is there more or am I just being hopeful?) underneath the chatspeak, and it's casual enough to actually seem like B and Mello. It's nice- perfect even. The ending was fabulous. The whole story was nice.

I very much like this.