I enjoyed how low-key and uncomfortable this scene was. It first perfectly with canon regarding what he knows of the Blacks, and what we know of Sirius being unlikely to tell Harry about it. You have a good hold on Sirius' inner voice, I especially enjoyed "weeping at the inevitable seemed a very Narcissa thing to do". You do a great job of capturing this highly intelligent lad who cannot be bothered with anything. The kiss was very interestingly written- neither of them want to, and there's nobody watching so they don't have to so it read as this weird moment of understanding and honesty between them. I also liked Sirius' blunt dialogue. An interesting and thought-provoking story.

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I really liked this, the briefness was really nice. Sirius's frustration really comes through in his narration, and I loved the softer side of Narcissa.

This is beautifully done. The mood of it is excellent and adds a lot to the piece. The shortness of the piece fits well, and Sirius and Narcissa's characters are interesting and believable. Their one moment of truth is good and well-written. Wonderful job with this story!

Wtf? That moment between the two of them was too random, but funny.