Damn.

You write Vortex wonderfully.

... is it weird that I find this touching?

Wow. Protective/concerned Vortex. Can you make him anymore awesome?

Yayy~ :D Like the perspective..

Poor Smokescreen~ :3

Your Vortex is, and always shall be, my favourite. 3

Also, the subtle reference to his glue gun made me giggle.

You really know how to write a chilling Vortex. I could see him doing this, definitely.

I have got to say the last line got me. I can see Vortex doing this.

The format was different but enjoyable.

Completely nasty-hilarious. Your plot bunnies have rabies, don't they?

The above comments should be taken to translate into "Don't stop," by the way ...