A phenomenal story - beautiful development of character, just enough detail and very sweet.

awwww that was awesome xD you should really win this contest :D

I Absolutely Loved this story 3

Awe I wish there was more :(

wow. your story was just amazing! i loved it so much and at the end i was just speachless. you truly have a talent for writing. great job )

So you have time to write a oneshot but not Broken Moonlight or I'll Show You Madness! i liked the story, but COME ON! I have waited long enough! if you dont update your shit, i wont read it anymore!

i loved the oneshot.

Wow...that was all i could say when finished reading this story. I really think you should consider making it a full blown story if u are up to it...im down to help if you consider it. I have read a fuck ton of fan fiction and none of them have gotten this shocked and aww expression like this one did from me...very well done, very very well done

Awesome Chapter!

Absolutely wonderful. Thank you.

Awesome love this

Oh I can't tell you how much I appreciate this story. It is so moving. I wanted to laugh and cry at the same time.

You painted a picture of Volturra, of the countryside, the castle and santiago's room. Then you painted the heart of a valiant man/vampire who followed the wishes of his dying mother and found true love.

The runner was the epitome of a spirit that breaks free and rises to a height where no one else has gone before.

A love story, a life ending and finally soulmates beginning.

Whoa... I really didn't expect that ending... it was so amazing