This. Was. Sweet. I mean sweet in a loving way.

You've captured an intimate moment that is all about affection and a few moments of stolen contentment. Just lovely!

great story!

As Shosanna said, it was very short but sweet. You managed to capture a nice, quiet moment between the two characters.

Good job.

awwww! This was so good!

Well done! You're quite good ya know, you should seriously expand into full stories, but this on-shots superb on its own merit :)

It's very vivid, which I like, and so very sweet- simple intimacy that we all need from time to time, plus im just so happy you put these two together :)

Congrats and look forward to reading more in the future!

Much Love!

I.S xooxoxox