Reviews for Carrion
wallyfan chapter 3 . 4/19/2014
In short, you sir hv tons of SKILLZ.
Mdthgpjmr chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
Another chapter and please make Annabeth switch sides soon
Wendlekins chapter 4 . 12/17/2011
so I remember this was the first fanfiction I ever read and now coming back to it... it's one of the most intriguing I definitely think you should continue and update! please :)
Forex chapter 4 . 8/12/2011
Update Update Update
cheech98 chapter 4 . 5/29/2011
wow, this story is awesome! you're an AMAZING writer!

please complete this story! its good enough to be a book and i read alot of books. you have officially earned my life long respect man!

~cheyenne~
Azn chapter 4 . 5/11/2011
This Is a really good concept. Plz continue it!
Owltalon chapter 4 . 4/16/2011
Omg!

Please update!

This is a really good plot!
pi R round chapter 4 . 4/5/2011
This story is excellent, both in concept and in style. I'm not as shocked as some of the other reviewers at the low comment count, though. Four chapters in 5 months along with an M rating will do that. I'm not admonishing you for it, just pointing out that a slow pace like that in such a large fandom will bury the story to the nether reaches. One thing, you can't exactly drive up to Alcatraz in a rented Dodge...unless it's a Dodge Helicopter.

And hooray for Eris! Now there is a goddess worth writing about. So much room for mischief.

Again, I'm loving everything so far from the plot, to the characterization, and especially the construction. Keep going!
jiapryor chapter 4 . 4/2/2011
*gasp* PERCY! NO!

Wonderful chapter (when aren't they wonderful?) as always. I'm always left speechless.
Eragonfan12 chapter 3 . 3/2/2011
Hey just got done reading through your story and I find it really good. Your story is similar to my idea, mine was what if the gods had gone war in the first book? Then built on that. But, this good enough for me, besides, my parents would not allow me to write my own fanfiction, already tried that out.

Anyway, nice story, keep it up, and update soon!

~Eragonfan12~
Blackhawk1997 chapter 3 . 3/1/2011
Nice story, please continue. I have a feeling the final battle will be an epic one.
Insomniac Owl chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
There is a strange mix of archaic language and modern speech, which could very well be what you're aiming for, but I find it a little off-putting. It would be really cool if it were done in that sort of formal, flowy tone, but I'd master modern-language first ;)
Anonymous chapter 3 . 3/1/2011
Who is it? The Titans, the giants from the lost hero, maybe even some of the minor gods, or a combination of the three. I for one am a little shocked our saying Percy did it with some random girl in Vegas while he's still hoping for a chance with Annabeth, I dont think he would do that. Other then that I think the story is coming along quite nicely, I'm glad you brought Nico in. Can't wait for an update.
Mockingbirds chapter 3 . 2/27/2011
Yeah same I've been wondering why this hasn't had many reviews since it is a pretty good story from what I have read. I've read a lot of stories and this is pretty good.
jiapryor chapter 2 . 2/20/2011
I truly don't understand why this doesn't have an abundant of reviews. Not only is the content of this rich and full, but the delivery of the text is head on. Your sensory and descriptive details are extremely well written. I'm excited to read more of this!
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