Reviews for Unexpected
Guest chapter 10 . 6/18
He's Yusuke's friend, so no I can't romance him. Lol. As of that weak excuse would ever hold. Kagome's ultimate weakness is her heart, the moment Kurama steals it she'll be a goner, as for the fox... Well, I don't think he'll last long either. I mean, reason already flew out the window twice for him and in front of Yusuke the first time no less, since this is Kurama who is seen as the most level headed character on YYH then it's serious.
Seriously, Kagome's charisma is deadly. Hiei already fell in her friends sphere.
Guest chapter 9 . 6/18
Aww Inuyasha at least has enough sense to try and warn Kagome. Hiei sure is confused but he did see her photos of her friends, so...
I like how Hiei took it upon himself to protect Yusuke's sister, like he feels the detective is too incompetent so he has to step up to the task. As the good big brother he is.
And Kurama... I wonder when he began to take more interest in Kagome than merely curiosity, it felt sudden, last chapter he was worried for her and all but didn't display this extreme attraction.
TekoloKuautli chapter 6 . 6/16
Ahahaha! Hiei would take advantage of that conversation to push Yusuke's newly found brotherly instincts towards both Kurama and Kuwabara haha
Guest chapter 5 . 6/16
Best way to get Kurama's attention? Give him a good puzzle and mystery with a dose of danger. And sniffing around Yusuke's sister is a good way to get the stuffing punched out of you haha
Guest chapter 4 . 6/16
That was fast, Kagome got along with Yusuke swimmingly after a few bumps in the road. But we'll both protagonists are pretty similar: charismatic, compassionate, bad tempered, proud and lacking in ill will.
TekoloKuautli chapter 2 . 6/15
That wasn't awkward or anything XD
I know my own father has another family and kids elsewhere, and I'd hope to god never meeting them. I don't think I'm a good enough person to see them as family, not that I would deny them sanctuary were their lives in danger but still...
TekoloKuautli chapter 1 . 6/15
Is he being mind controlled? It's just so jarring.
CrimsonQueen24 chapter 21 . 6/25/2018
Hot damn this is good! I really want to know when the Spirit Detectives finally figure out that Kagome knows a lot more than they think :) Also want to know what the heck is up with Inuyasha! Super cool plot. I’m so glad Yusuke and Kagome the siblings. They totally have the same temper lol. Anywho, can’t wait for more!
yukihime88 chapter 21 . 12/17/2016
i wanna read her complete the jewel but i guess that's only possible if this story got an update.
lara5170 chapter 2 . 10/2/2016
Kagome's hair is sure short in this story, shoulder length
lara5170 chapter 17 . 10/2/2016
Wouldn't Kagome be able to find the jewel easy since she can feel and see it?
ambersnowflake chapter 21 . 6/28/2016
*Hysterically screaming* Continue! Continue! Continue! Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaseeeeeee!
MidnightReader1 chapter 21 . 5/22/2016
Love this story can't wait for the next chapter :)
Lil-lo chapter 1 . 8/31/2015
In my case I have read through this story once and I was checking to see if I had reviewed. I really enjoyed the dynamics of how Kagome related to the Yu-Yu cast.

I remember I liked that Kagome and Yusuke really had to work at being family, instead of instantly bonding.

For this chapter, I'm glad that you gave a warning that Inu Yasha was deliberately out of character. Overall I hope one day inspiration hits you again.
Guest chapter 21 . 7/29/2015
Ooooo I love how you write the Kurama/Kagome interactions!
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