Oh so sweet thanks for a very good read

Great first chapter! Love the interaction between Lisbon and Jane, really sweet. Liking Jane's plan alot :)

Awww, so cute!

very cute, and I loved Lisbon in that, UTTERLY BRILLIANT...kiddo. :P

Awwwww they are such a cute couple! You know, you should write a oneshot about Jane appearing at work without his shirt :D lots of description needed ;)

Very cute, I like how she makes him sweat!

Awwwww.

The insatiable romantic in me is squeeing, jumping up and down, and wanting a third chapter ;)

Aww, I'm glad she's giving "them" a chance. She's very lucky to have won the love of Patrick Jane, and vice versa.

Like the hint of possessiveness. :)

Write more soon! I can't wait until you do! :)

I never write Jane so confidently, but you pull it off wonderfully! I can actually see this in my mind's eye. :) Ace job! *favorited* ;)

I really enjoyed this. It was so sweet. I loved when Lisbon was having fun with a nervous Jane. I did too. It's rarely or at all for that matter that we see him that way. It's kind of fun. lol Loved the fluffiness and teasing. I just love a nice Jisbon ending. This was fantabilous! :D

Wonderful chapter! I'm disappointed there won't be another, but this was a good way to end it. :) Great job!

It was a nice story ! Thanks !

That was cute! And you know, I always thought Lisbon was Grinchier inside the office. Although I do think Jane's heart has grown since joining the CBI and meeting Lisbon. ;)

Ooh, did Jane's pupils dilate? :D

I think you should continue, but just enough to make this a two-shot. I don't think much more would be needed.

Write more soon!

So nice!

I hope you update soon as you can...

What about the real first date...some tradicional. Romantic or something unexpected

Well have a good day

Of course you should continue! You can't just leave me-ahem, us-hanging! Please keep going, this was really good! :D