Oh, I thought this was beautiful :) It was really well written and it was so sad, for me at least. Short, but effective. Well done :)

Awww

So sad.

But really well done

You should write an aftermath of the war...with dean

You see, you do not get many dean thomas stories...sadly

Fantastic job

: )

Good story. I really liked it. There's just one mistake that I found. Dean couldn't have had an older sister. When he was a baby, his (wizard) father left his mother to protect her when Voldemort went after him. Later she got married to Mr. Thomas who adopted Dean. That's why he was a wizard and his sisters weren't witches. His father was wizard, but both of their parents were muggles. Other than that, I really liked it!

Ooh, this was brilliant. I really liked it. It never ceases to amaze me what some people can do with such a simple suggestion. As for your OC's, I think a little piece of me now believes they're all real. Kudos.