Very well-written story, so much said in these short chapters!

Haha, Edward did end up carrying the laundry basket, after all. :)
Yeah, things are definitely looking up.

Give and take, right? :)

Oh, she had been thinking of Jasper in the previous chapter. :)
Edward has really been very thoughtful, helping her in little ways.
And he is opening up to her.

Ah yes, a comic book. That I can imagine getting myself lost into, to forget RL, you know. :)
Definitely progress.
Bella has a brother? And he doesn't help with their father?

Oh, poor Bella, and poor Charlie. Edward...hos problem seems more on an emotional front.

Very unusual premise, and...fairly serious. Both of them have problems to deal with, and are not interested in other people.

He wants her to promise to stop reading those trashy novels! Jk

I love how snobby Edward is turning into a softie.

Ooohh! I love how that chapter ended. Spiderman! Lol!

I'm gonna go ahead and admit that the Charlie phone call made me cry a little bit.

It was such a wonderful story and beautifully written. I really enjoyed reading it.

Hi,

I've finished reading all your stories and even tho they were written a few years ago I wanted you to know how much I enjoyed them. I see you aren't doing fanfic anymore but I hope you're still writing.

Thanks for the stories!

Thanks for the fun novella!

I enjoyed story. Thank you!