Reviews for Fraternizing is an Ugly word
AshenMoon42 chapter 25 . 11/11/2018
Awww! Everything about this is beautiful. Trust me, everything. Ted's character is so soft and sweet (like a big teddy bear), while Andromeda is perfectly sharp and cold at the beginning, becoming warmer as the story progresses. The reactions and break ups are really realistic, too. I love this so much, and you should be so proud of yourself!
Ydream08 chapter 13 . 4/3/2018
TELL ME THAT SHE IS NOT PREGNANT. You can't do that to my sweet heart. NO. Absolutely no. Please? Oh, gosh. I have to read...and what about Titus...oh god I'm gonna cry...
Ydream08 chapter 12 . 4/3/2018
"But I'm going too kill him so don't get too attached."? THIS WAS THE BEST LINE EVER. I SIRIUSLY laughed out loud. Oh, by the way, I want to kill that Gamp girl, the trollop. Titus deserves better. And just when he dreamed about buying her a ring. I'm not about the whole virgin/virtue thing, but she is outright cheating on him. I won't accept that for dear Titus. He is cinnamon roll number 2. Nice chapter :D
Ydream08 chapter 9 . 4/3/2018
I want Ted and Melanie to break up. Am I a bad person to want this- asks the person who writes to end *marriages*. lol. Good chapter. I like Ted and Andromeda's dynamic. Their conversation is fun to read, you've done amazing job at the dialogues.
Ydream08 chapter 7 . 4/3/2018
He asked Melanie out? Of course, she said yes. Ted Tonks is a cute cinnamon roll! BUT BUT BUT what about Andromeda? I love how their friendship has evolved. It's still afar for Andromeda to think of him in a romantic way, but it is amazing how those old insults doesn't occur to her when, say, Ted mentions going home and that means to his Muggle parents? Great detail. Loved the chapter. By the way, you mentioned Tom being from a pureblood family, I didn't read his surname, hope I'll come across it!
Ydream08 chapter 6 . 4/3/2018
I KNEW IT. Oh, the gossip! I can't imagine what will flare in Hogwarts. Damn, it will be harsh on her. Oh, I'm so excited to see what will happen!
Ydream08 chapter 5 . 4/3/2018
RABASTAN? Seriously. There is something fishy about this. I don't want to be on the same page with Bellatrix LeStrange, but I don't trust Rabastan. If he and Andromeda had no correspondence and he is such a womanizer, than it can't be a serious courtship! Argh. I'm confused, but great chapter!
Ydream08 chapter 4 . 4/3/2018
I LOVE your Tom. I don't know why you named him Tom, but he is such a Tom Riddle only in different color. Don't get me wrong, he is still a Hufflepuff but I see the Riddle potential in him. Anyway. The true Hufflepuff is TED. Cleaning ALL of the trophies?! Well, something he would have done. Nice chapter. Let's see how Andromeda will react to Ted showing up in Shrieking Shack!
Ydream08 chapter 3 . 4/3/2018
I've really loved your different characterization of everyone! First of all, this story is one of the few that I've come across that has the Black sisters ages in the right order (it's mixed even in my stories, I've only recently checked HP wiki), thumbs up to you for that. What I absolutely loved that you've done different is also having Rabastan as the eldest brother, being the one to inherit everything. Rodophus, in such case, falls short for Bellatrix's standards as the second-in-line, thus why it makes total sense to me that she would seek out Voldemort as a love-interest in the future. Those aside, seeing this Andromeda was really eye-opening for me. For first, you've written very well how prejudiced she is, and her insults to Ted's mother emphasize how engrained these beliefs are into her. I'm eager to see what really changes her mind. Because it is not just Muggle-born issue (although that is the major one) but she also looks down on the Hufflepuff house. I adore the setting you've created, the characters and Ted Tonks who is such a cute Hufflepuff with how he stood up for Ruth! Thank you for writing this story! I'm dying to read the rest of it :DDDD Amazing work!
Broweyesandhair chapter 25 . 9/29/2016
This story is wonderful I really enjoyed reading it.
Alytiger chapter 25 . 3/2/2016
This is so adorable?! I cried a few times, but I love it just the same.
BooksbyMoonlight chapter 9 . 11/14/2015
This is the first Ted x Andromeda fix that I read, and I only started reading it because I was bored. I'm surprised at how much I actually love it! It might become my favorite fanfiction I've ever read!
sfox88 chapter 25 . 9/3/2014
A simple favorite isn't enough...but I don't know what to say.
sierendipity chapter 25 . 6/22/2014
I know this happened ... what, now, three years ago? But regardless, I had to leave a review and tell you how much I appreciate the quality, story line and character development of this beautiful story. Thank you :)
Ibbonray chapter 25 . 4/8/2014
I loved this. The romantic progression was gradual, always offering for a great story. Thank you for this gift. Best regards.
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