| Reviews for Protector |
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elanga.blake chapter 9 . 4/25 its a great story, one of the best i've ever read. has anyone adopted it. unfortunately i'm not up to your sisters level and couldn't do it justice but i would love to see how someone finished it. |
wandamarie chapter 10 . 2/2 Thankyou |
wandamarie chapter 9 . 2/2 Oh ok |
wandamarie chapter 8 . 2/2 Holy cow poo getting good |
wandamarie chapter 7 . 2/2 Famstack work love story and chapter |
wandamarie chapter 6 . 2/2 Nice job on the story and chapter |
wandamarie chapter 5 . 2/2 Keep up the great work on the story |
wandamarie chapter 4 . 2/2 Thank you good job |
wandamarie chapter 3 . 2/2 Wow getting good |
wandamarie chapter 2 . 2/2 Great job on the story so far |
wandamarie chapter 1 . 2/1 Thank you |
Sabpars7 chapter 10 . 6/7/2018 I really enjoyed the original Protector. I read the adopted version. Ugh. Your sisters version, and yours, much much much better |
Time Emperor chapter 4 . 3/18/2018 And ha e a headache trying to read all of this. |
ScarletRainbow1 chapter 10 . 3/5/2018 I am sorry you have surrendered this story. I think it was wonderful. |
BlazeVein chapter 2 . 11/1/2016 a 2 year boy reading? maybe at 4. 2 y.o. are enterely depebdent in an adult. plus, is potty trained or not? |