AWESOME

Choice 2.

I'm really late but I love it

OMG! cAN YOU MAKE MORE LIKE THI PLEASE! I'M CRYING IN HAPPINESS HERE!

I agreed with Annabeth. 'When you read, it's like a T.V in your head. But the thing i imagine with Percy. Since when does he read?! And i can hardly imagine him wearing F.B.I clothing. All i can imagine is crooked armor and the F.B.I words. LOL.

Love it

I've read some pretty negative comments on here, and that's super sucky but don't let it get you down, if you want to write than keep writing! Ps Raquel's my middle name, so cool coincidence

I'm sorry Raquel's a dick. She/he is very immature and needs to get a life. Also you can be happy from the color red if it's your favorite color. Blue makes me happy and not sad. They say people associate yellow with happiness but I associate it with mucus. :-)

You should not listen to other people who don't know how much time it takes to write a perfect story.. don't listen to those assholes... about the story, I love it..

You are DISSIN QUEEN!
Seriously! How pathetic are you!
Does it HURT, to be you every day!?
You know what? FUCK YOU and your pathetic excuse for writing!
I am DONE with this mother fucking piece of shit that could barely pass for crap!

Yep.
Crappy writer

You are a very crappy writer!
The only reason that I'm still reading this is because I want to see whether or not you will fail miserably

Why do you keep on writing about the colour red so much?!
AND...Red Does NOT MAKE YOU HAPPY!
It has been scientifically proven that the colour red, stimulates the brainwaves into a fit of aggression or anger.
That's why red I'd the colour of Aries, God of WAR!
And fix up your grammar!

You need to work on your people skills.
You write like this.
Boxed off and blunt.
Quit ending the sentences so hard.
Be like water. Smooth, gentle and flowing
Add more writing
It seems like you are in a rush to finish the chapters

Hi there Gogreen43, so I love your stories but small note. Whenever you try to spell definitely you say defiantly. Those are 2 different words and I have noticed that in other stories as well like Homecoming and Taken. Try to fix that but the plot is awesome!