Coffee, this was really impressive! It's a beautiful freeverse, and I think you've captured Lysander and his feelings wonderfully!

" chases critter imagines creature stares into spac play quidditch, talk to girls, laugh, smile, have animated eyes"

That was my favourite part, I think! :D

Really lovely, Coffee!

Dude, that is super cool.

Just sayin ;)

Gah, this is really good.

I adore your Lysander, like ohmygosh- he's always been my favourite guy, you know. And the wording you used was great- about how everyone else in his family is psycho but he's /normal/.

I can see Lysander like that- with a desire to prove himself.

And yeah, I see them the same way, sort of, so ;)

Really nice job, and good grammar, terrific wording.

Loved it!

Sanity's over rated anyway, or so they say. Haha.

Ahem, anyway, this is a lovely freeverse. I happen to adore Lysander with a firey hot passion (okay, maybe not) but I like how you focused on him and how everyone THINKS that he's so much different than his family, but how he's really not. Because that was a really intriguing idea. I've always seen Lysander as being the more 'normal' twin of the two, but that's probably just me. :D

Kudos to you for writing such a good freeverse.

Ohh, this is beautiful! Heartbreaking and sort of aching, but beautiful nonetheless. I really very much like your Lysander and your take on his family - while I'm a fan of a sane Rolf myself, I must admit to liking yours a lot! - and how he just tries to be normal but can't succeed.

And, while I'm here, I just wanted to thank you for your review to my TeddyMolly freeverse, 'cause I couldn't send you a reply ;) Thank you so much, it was a lovelylovely review! And, I know, I end up sort of despising Molly after I write her into my LucyLorcan pieces, so then I feel bad and go write her nicely. (Im weird like that!) And I see Molly and Lucy as around the same age as James Sirius, or perhaps Albus. So Molly would be considerably younger than Teddy, but still definitely old enough to have a crush on him ;) And I know that goes against JKRs stuff with Lysander and Lorcan and Molly and Lucy being much younger, but... yeah. I prefer them like this ;)

Thanks again - and once again, this was a thoroughly beautiful freeverse, and you deserve far more than 3 reviews!

Oooooooh chills! Amazing. Very well formatted and it flows very well. The "star bright" line fit in so perfectly, and it's always fun to reference songs/books/movies.

I actually imagined Lysander almost the same way. I imagined him being fairly normal (and very normal compared to his father) and Lorcan being very dreamy like his mother. But I never thought about the idea that he's viewed as crazy because no one gives him the chance to be anything else. Very interesting. I may have to fit that into his ten facts, if you don't mind.

Very well done for a first freeverse! It doesn't seem like your first at all. Definitely favoriting!

Oooh, freeverse! My type of poetry. This was great, it really painted a picture of the family in my head. I think I could relate to Lysander.

Beautiful!