since you made Sesshomaru mad about abi can you make naraku hella jealous about a demon Sesshomaru knows

lol poor Rin

lol go naraku!

awesome

This chapter is amazing! I am a little put off doe its like, its all happening so fast... this can not be the last chapter cause this fic has way too much potential for it to be

Hey, I love this new version of the story. However, I was hoping i could re read the original since that one is completed and i also want to read remember me before it is updated. However, It. Has been deleted. Is there any way it could be reposted separately until the updated version is completed? Or does anyone have it saved? Thanks!

They’re getting there! I love this! Maybe your 3rd story could be called “You and Me” or switch the “me” to “you”, for Naraku. For example, “Being With You”
Hope that helps even a little!

Hello friend!

Maybe you could do something with "you" instead of "me", since it'll be coming from Sesshomaru's point of view. I don't know, I'm not very creative but it's what came to mind.
Also, I'm really enjoying this version. I really enjoyed the other one too. They're both very good in their own right, just depends on what you're looking for. personally, I like Sessh getting a little roughed up, but the mental confusion in this one gives a completely different side of the same concept. I like it. great job.

happy writing!

Well, it's been a long time, my friend. Glad to see you're still kicking and writing. I am, too, but I read and write mostly on AO3 which is why I'm kinda dead on ff net.

Anywho, I still do appreciate Nara/Sess and this was one of my favorite stories concerning them. Is there a reason why you decided to rewrite them? Just curious. I will say, I do like the idea that Naraku isn't using dub/non-con to get Sesshoumaru this time . Him taking his time seducing Sesshounaru until he falls for him is actually very much very Naraku-like, so I do applaud that. I do like the way this story is going. There are slight grammatical errors but it doesn't really bother me (we all have 'em lol) but otherwise it's flowing well. Def looks like Sess is starting to reluctantly fall for our favorite kumo.;)

Really loved this the first time around! Very happy that you’re re-editing! I will definitely continue reading!

Wow, this new version is even better than the last one, I'm glad you decided to rewrite it.

So tell me why I was smack dab in the middle of reading the other version of this, and boom! I walk away come back and this new version is here. lol well I didn't walk away, I went to work lmao. but still!
I am enjoying this new version though. it's entirely different, bit I like it!

Happy writing!

Naraku you sly devil, lol! He always knows how to scheme and get what he wants. And his methods were pretty hit. I love that you kept Sesshomaru still acting like Sesshomaru despite being made uke. His pride would never allow him to be completely submissive.
And the Inuyasha parts were so Inuyasha! I wonder what will become of him now that Sesshy and Naraku are one. You did a great job. I really like this story.

Oh, I love this.

Oh. My. WORD. This was FANTASTIC! I must commend you on several aspects of this amazing fiction! First of all I was overly blow away at how spot on you kept their personalities. Sesshoumaru is a difficult entity to pin down and write without making him appear emotionless or monotone, not to mention writing him in a romance novel can be akin to sudden death for a lot of fictions of this genre. You, however pulled this off flawlessly, not once did I find myself thinking any of his actions were unbelievable. It is definitely apparent that you put a lot of thought into how you were going to phrase things as I find myself deeply impressed that you even stuck to their vocabulary as well. As for the m/preg with two dominant characters I must admit I was skeptical at first, as these two things together is akin to committing suicide for most fictions. I am SO glad that I stuck with this though, I don't know how you did it, but you PULLED IT OFF! It was believable and well written. The pacing of this fiction was done spectacularly well, especially given the circumstances of their...union. You somehow are able to write them so that they both remain the dominant male...Just in a different light. One more thing I have to leave you with, it was BRILLIANT how you reversed their roles when it came to the children and how they thought of them; it was a nice trade off and I believe it helped mend some of Sesshomarus pride at being the submissive of the relationship. Overall this is the best fictions I have read for InuYasha to date, and quite possibly the best I shall ever read. Imagine my glee when I discovered that there is a sequel! Congratulations to you my dear for a job well done! Cheers!