Freaking epic...I don't even read poetry fics, but this was just...-speechless-

Off to go and favorite! Write more please!

Awesome poem! It definitly portrays what happened during the Hunger Games. Please update soon! :D

You asked me to read and review this, so here I am: All the way from the beginning to after the part where it says 'Met an awful end' - I love. I think it was perfect (don't change a thing on that part)

Then after that it becomes less flowing. Maybe you could revise the last part to make it all flow into one from the part 'Did those kids have to die?' to the end. I think you are getting somewhere with this. I just didn't like the last half as much as I loved the first half. Good start though! I hope to see many more poems in your future.

~Lostliveson4eva

Wow, it sounds like a grownup wrote it!

Thank you all for reviewing and yes I did get an A on the assignment

Short & simple, but spectacular :)

that was good it makes me so sad though

First, nice job. :) I hope you got a good grade. One thing you could have worked on though is the rhythm of the poem - you know what I mean? Lines that are supposed to be related sometimes seem a bit choppy when put together. But other than that, I like it. :) There are some really good lines.

Nice. I like how you mentioned both Rue and the boy who killed her. Even the killers themselves were victims of the Capitol's cruelty.

I love this! Now, this was for an English assignment? Please tell me you got an A for this, because this is amazing!

It's really good, it's not a style I am familiar with but that makes it even better.