| Reviews for The Story Of Us |
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ozlawstudent chapter 2 . 5/8/2011 Please please please continue :-D. |
EverybodyNeedsABitOfLove chapter 2 . 12/6/2010 I can't wait for the next episode and I like your way of thinking ;) |
calleigh4ever chapter 2 . 12/4/2010 'You were always more than enough…' This so much! As always beautifully written and with a Lot of Emotion! For me you truly are the only writer where i can actually Picture everything that is written! |
funkyshaz57 chapter 2 . 12/4/2010 That was really really good - Sad of course anything that upsets Arizona is really hard for me to read...but you've set up the first two chapters now for them to have a real conversation - I'm so super excited for more! |
GreysAddictJ chapter 2 . 12/4/2010 Beautifully written! |
funkyshaz57 chapter 1 . 12/4/2010 Really wonderful you always write so well and I like your version I like that Calile's opened the door and hopefully will give her a chance to explain cos as much as AZ fucked up so did Callie too she's hardly been a saint since AZ left! Now you know I love your work but you have a few fics that I love unfinished so I'm hoping you won't do that to this fic? |
auggy1984 chapter 1 . 12/3/2010 awwwww |
WhenYouKissedHer chapter 1 . 12/3/2010 this is so good! definitely one of the best Callzona fics I've ever read. Can't wait for the next chapter :) |
calleigh4ever chapter 1 . 12/3/2010 beautifully written as always. you'll always be my favorite author in the world! |
A-whisper-of-a-thrill chapter 1 . 12/3/2010 Very nice writting. Can't wait for the next chapter! You wrote this before episode 10? Maybe you should write some more iPod drabbles so we wouldn't have to wait till Januari to see what happens next:D |
jazzga chapter 1 . 12/3/2010 Your detail and emotional descriptions is so clear,vivid. Wow, if only Grey's could be a little more insightful in their writing or their stories. I say in all of my comments that they can learn from the fanfic writers. This makes me really want to see where you take this, whether they get together or not-the talk is in order. I personally think they shouldn't get together right away. Also, you balanced it out-you made it where both were at fault for where they are-which is the case. Arizona for how she broke it off...Callie for the ultimatum. Ultimatums are always bad-you either get what you want with later resentment (possibly), or you get the opposite of what you want by forcing your partner in a corner. They come out defensive and make decisions based on pride rather than what's from the heart. forced decisions. Anyway, my opinion-I like your work, I love your work. Such good imagery. Regards... |