Reviews for Falling Apart
yaiolover chapter 2 . 7/30/2013
I have that song lol
Guest chapter 2 . 10/16/2012
continue :'D
Sooool chapter 2 . 7/11/2012
Holy mother of God! Poor Ciel... Alois you are a crazy crazy boy :O
please continue
thatonegrosskid chapter 2 . 9/4/2011
MAKE MORE! I BEGZ OF YOU'ZZ!
xkyo-chanx chapter 2 . 8/21/2011
pleaaseee continue
RinOkumura123 chapter 2 . 6/26/2011
STUPID ALOIS! i feel sorry for Ciel. XD
Hugglesaurus chapter 2 . 4/20/2011
Haha, awesome! I like it XD

Please continue it soon~

... by the way i looked up that song on youtube... I'm scared shitless O_O ... and i can understand how Ciel would be embarrassed and how Alois would know that song X''Dn
randomyaoilover chapter 2 . 4/20/2011
will you be continuing this story i just found it so funny with the song and the crossdressing and it's alois as the master... :P anyway hope to see a new chapter soon loving it so far :)
wolf-of-death-Hanone chapter 2 . 1/23/2011
lol poor ciel but i must say i love that song...mainly cos everyone else hates it XD cant wait for you to continue this!
nyan koi chapter 2 . 1/6/2011
im gonnaa lis3n to it
RainbowDanger chapter 2 . 1/6/2011
Candyland is an awesome song xD lol, poor Ciel x3 plz update soon .
uh cats chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
ohhhhhhhh mmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiiii more chaps pls
Shounen-Ai chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
Good so far. Just make sure to capitalize everyone's names. You seem to only capitalize at the beginning of sentences and then stop. Names are to be ALWAYS capitalized. :)

Example:

Ciel groggily walked throughout the halls of his mansion, trying to wipe the sleep from his eyes. It was the middle of the night, and, having trouble sleeping, ciel had gotten up and made his way to sebastian's room.

Revised:

Ciel groggily walked throughout the halls of his mansion, trying to wipe the sleep from his eyes. It was the middle of the night, and, having trouble sleeping, Ciel had gotten up and made his way to Sebastian's room.

Hope that helps~
RainbowDanger chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Hehe amazing plz update soon :3
darkchocosmoothie chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
ROFL! I was laughing some mad person throughout the whole chapter!
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