I have that song lol

continue :'D

Holy mother of God! Poor Ciel... Alois you are a crazy crazy boy :O
please continue

MAKE MORE! I BEGZ OF YOU'ZZ!

pleaaseee continue

STUPID ALOIS! i feel sorry for Ciel. XD

Haha, awesome! I like it XD

Please continue it soon~

... by the way i looked up that song on youtube... I'm scared shitless O_O ... and i can understand how Ciel would be embarrassed and how Alois would know that song X''Dn

will you be continuing this story i just found it so funny with the song and the crossdressing and it's alois as the master... :P anyway hope to see a new chapter soon loving it so far :)

lol poor ciel but i must say i love that song...mainly cos everyone else hates it XD cant wait for you to continue this!

im gonnaa lis3n to it

Candyland is an awesome song xD lol, poor Ciel x3 plz update soon .

ohhhhhhhh mmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiiii more chaps pls

Good so far. Just make sure to capitalize everyone's names. You seem to only capitalize at the beginning of sentences and then stop. Names are to be ALWAYS capitalized. :)

Example:

Ciel groggily walked throughout the halls of his mansion, trying to wipe the sleep from his eyes. It was the middle of the night, and, having trouble sleeping, ciel had gotten up and made his way to sebastian's room.

Revised:

Ciel groggily walked throughout the halls of his mansion, trying to wipe the sleep from his eyes. It was the middle of the night, and, having trouble sleeping, Ciel had gotten up and made his way to Sebastian's room.

Hope that helps~

Hehe amazing plz update soon :3

ROFL! I was laughing some mad person throughout the whole chapter!