Oh, that was gloriously beautiful.

Bravo!

More please. :)

This story is nothing short of fantastic. You did a wonderful job of filling in the details of Rilian's imprisonment in a realistic, moving manner, and your portrayal of his relationship with Aslan was powerful. I always wondered about what really happened with Rilian and the Queen, and assumed that the real story would probably not be child-friendly, which is why C.S.L didn't go into further detail. An excellent portrait of redemption from the very depths of sin and despair. Very well done!