I wanna know what happens next xD

I really like the ending and how sudden it is! Also, the part where he thought the portal was a bird stuck out to me for a bit of a silly, personal reason of my own: when I was first playing Breath of the Wild, looking at Hyrule from the Great Plateau, I thought Vah Medoh was a twilight portal at first!

It is a shame you never continued this.

...I like this, I'd like to see it continued. How's Link gonna get out of this one?

Oh, come on! You can't leave it there! What happens next!

Woah. This was really good! The ending left me wanting more!

No joke, I've been waiting to find this fic for years. This is perfect.

Ending a one shot on the cliff hanger is quite harsh.

;-;

Oh.. poor Talo. I never went to the spring to transform back, always behind Renado's house. It's always a little irritating. Side note: Never actually paid for the bridge. And I beat the hands in 3 tries total, 2 for the first one and 1 for the second one. Failed at getting the boss key though. And I hit that pole during the bow challenge without using the Eagle Eye. First try. Twilight Princess is by far my favorite game of all time. Haven't beat it yet though. XD Been at it for a few years. I'm a procrastinator.

LOL, I'm sorry for this:
. . . SQUARES! THE HORROR!

I like that Link never finds out what's bothering Talo. It's a clever ending, and a nice play on the NPC mechanics within the game.

Great story! Realistically, the way Link teleports in the game is pretty reckless. He is almost always within eyeshot of townspeople. This was a really well-written story capturing what would happen. It would be interesting to see the repercussions of Link being discovered.

Very interesting take on what could happen if Talo saw Link teleport into the village.

Oh snap! Lucky for Link that doesn't happen