Come on add more chapters please

I hate stories like this. Desperate attempts to make a terrible self centered character look innocent

Great job!
-Sammi

I liked this in the beginning, but now I just feel like your just beating up finn. Ya, we know he can b stupid, god knows, but he's not THIS ignorant, and escudos not any better. Don't get me wrong, its pretty good, I just thought I could give u some constructive criticism. Finn was pretty good at making Rachel feel special, and personally I think calling her beautiful tops hot any day, ur kinda dismissing all of the amazing things he's done for her. I'm not saying he's perfect, I'm just saying u portrayed him as a braindead toddler. Theres more to him than that. I liked it overal, please don't take this personally, I'm just giving u some feedback on what u could do better next fic.

This was good stuff. I know it was written almost 2 years ago, but it is very appopriate to season 4. They are reinventing themselves and are currently broken up. Everything you wrote was spot on about moving forward. Crossing my fingers for them getting back together soon and learing from their mistakes. Looking forward to reading more from you.

Love it!

Iloved this story 3 one of my favorites:)

Finchel forever! I swear if they break up this season...I loved your story. I love how Rachel didn't just leap back into Finn's arms, and how you made them getting back together really sweet and special. Great story :D

I'm so glad you wrote this! Most people ignore Artie's sexism or pass it off as cute, instead of unnecessary and insulting.

I thought their treatment of Rachel was horrible. They never did have the Cheerios apologize for their bullying or make anyone friends with Rachel. Also, she really cared about the club and they always just called her annoying. I love this story!

WHAT ABOUT THE DORM! CONTINUEEE! Even though this is realllly old...

EPIC. MORE PLEASE. 3

Pleaaaaaaaase continue this story! Maybe you could have Puck meet them in NY or something and Finn get really jealous. That would be funny.

HE booked them a joint dorm? or oh my god he moved colleges ! nooo -

WAIT .. i'm having a diva moment ...

I need you to write the next chapter to the new story to find out ! the suspense

any way good work byeeeeeeeeeeee

xox DP

Wow!

I love how you capture Rachel's character so well, even in these circumstances that are so different to anything she's been through before :)