Have Maria surprise Sarah Jane with knocking on her door with flowers in front of her face and then have them both admit their feelings of love for each other.

i like it

this is awesome

This story is not a m it is more like a k

I am the older sister of Tye-dye. This is not good in the slightest - I don't think. You have very bad grammar. I support xxxCattxxx and her stories :D Please try not to do anything bad like copying other's stories because it is not good to do so. I have came up with my ideas with help from others but they are original.

Please improve your grammar, it is insulting to the human intelligance.

Thank you for listening *bows*

This is not good. I honestly don't know who you think you are but you can't just go and steal xxCatxx sory. And this is really bad and mean that you would even say this is better than hers. PLEASE don't continue.

You may think I'm being harsh but you're worse. You threaten someone because they're a good writer that's pathetic.

Look, I'm sure you're a brilliant author, but if this was real life, you would be sued. I can help you if you want with a new story if you want!

I apologise for sounding like a right biotch, but I thought it just wasn't fair.

Love,

Tammie x

Don't you have to ask permission if you are going to steal someone else's idea? No offense, but I prefer xxxCattxxx's story.

I don't know if this is a proper chapter or not, but if it is, then it would be better if you wrote it out properly, and not like a lazy play.

Otherwise, good luck with the story, and I hope that it turns out to be the best that you have written.

Quite an interesting plot so far! I'd like to see how you decide to end it differently to my Maria's Return!

this is a really good idea for a story but it sounds very familiar to me, has another person come up with is idea at all?