For being that new to this fandom, I thought you captured the core of Kurt and Blaine's characters incredibly well! GREAT WORK!

This was awesome, I loved the ending!

Oh, this was too good! I loved it.. especially the last line. What a kick. I think you had the characters down. Don't be so hesitant to post things! This was amazing.

Caitlin(:

Love it :)

Adorable closing! :)

Simply beautiful story.

I'm just sitting here, currently thinking about where I should begin with this.

I can hardly believe two things. The first is that you're new to Glee. The second is that this is the first Glee fanfiction you've written. The fact is, it looks like you've been watching the show for ages. I read the entire thing and you've captured the characters very well. So even though when you wrote this, you'd only seen five episodes, it looked as though you've seen the whole two series of it. You've written Kurt flawlessly. The entire story is just amazing, start to finish.

Also, Blaine and Kurt hugging? Instant Klainegasm. Instant. And, oh yes. Kurt CAN dance like that. 'Cause he's all pro and Kurt-like.

I really encourage you to write some more for Glee, one day. You write brilliantly for it. (:

It's Mel from tumblr, by the way.

I think it was good. I'm pretty new too, but I've been catching up a lot thanks to fanfiction and youtube. Also watching the occasional show from 1st season. It was cute, and you did a good job, in my opinion, for just starting. Thanks for posting!

hpswst101

I love the way you write. For your first glee fanfic this is really good and i love the way you can relate back to the show, i know others who just go on their own ideas. You stay true to glee and it makes it easier to understand the story. I love the last line. It was cute and made me giggle. Yeah you know who this is now. But still! your writing as amazing and seriously love the way you explain how Kurt is feeling. It makes you feel so much for him, and get giddy when Blaine is around.

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I think you did pretty good at getting their characterization. I liked this. It was fantastic. Great job.

Awww, cute, I love how concerned Blaine was about Kurt. I have a bit of a guilty pleasure for hurt\comfort, so thank you for this!

Good job. I think you got the characters down pretty well, especially Blaine.

Ah this was really sweet :)

You did quite well! I encourage you to watch season one, though season two features Kurt much more prominently. You should definitely continue this somehow :)

this is awful. the characters are completely different to what they are on the show. kurt would never pretend to blaine that nothing is wrong. that was a terrible idea. it looks badly formatted when you do that - - - - - - - - - X x X - - - - - - - - - - because you dont need to make it so obvious. good writers can give subtle ways of going into a new setting. just awful. dont continue.