Huh, pretty interesting so far I guess. Usually not my type of thing to read but you made it acceptable I guess. XD

Don't be discouraged though, I like it~. Keep it up.

Sorry for the late review...I'm having my finals. Studying and stuff.

Ok. I forgot to add that I suck at rhyming so I couldn't really type a good Epros which really irritated me. I thought of one good rhyme but that took me like half an hour so I just didn't do any rhyming. If that bugged anyone and made my story suck more I'm really sorry .; But other then that I hope you all liked it.