this was gold, and I wish you wrote more, just so that hiruma and sena could complete each other or something, but this was so amazingly heart-wrenching and beautiful that all is forgiven, my imagination will have to do

Heyyy~! I really love this fanfic! The story, your vocabulary, and grammar are all perfect! I hope there is the second chapter, I'll wait~

My gawd i cried. I actually cried. I love this.

To be honest, Musashi? That would have been awesome too, but this is really good. Good to see another side of Hiruma.

I'm sorry, this is the last time. I promise. It's just, god this ending. It's fucking perfect. How do you do it? How do you write like this? I wish I could write like this. God I wish you could write more. I wish i could just read your writing forever. Sorry if that's kind of creepy. I'll stop now.

Seriously though, you've ruined other Eyeshield 21 writers for me. Your writing is amazing.

My god, I wish I could kidnap you and make you write for me for the rest of your life. All of your imageries and emotions in your delicious, erotic writing just makes my heart flutter and now I can't stop. I've read all of your stories and now I don't know what to do. Please write more. I know it's been three years and you probably don't even like Eyeshield 21 anymore but please write more.

CHRIST THIS IS AMAZING
Written in a weirdly awesome POV

Love it :'D
I need a sequel oh gods orz

Aaaaaaahhhhhhh why can't there be a sequel to this!? *sobs* I would have loved to see the development between them and I also thought it was interesting how you changed Hiruma's hair color back to his original hair color instead of the dyed blonde he had during highschool which was one of his traid mark looks. :)

Awwwww! I love this sooooo so much. Honjo is one lucky MF to have Sena's love protecting him from Hiruma's wrath. I'm hoping that Sena will give Hiruma the OK to do what he will, but he is too nice and loving. Oh well! HirumaxSena will forever be strong!

Gah, a great read! Thanks for sharing!

Woah, that was intense. And brilliant.
I love the beginning, where I kept wondering who it was. When I read Honjou, I first thought it had to be Monta, since he's obsessed with him after all, and that it really was Sena came as quite a surprise. A great one, though, because I really liked the whole difficulty with Monta ans Taka being friends and Sena not being able to tell him and suffering alone.
I really felt with Sena, and I think you wrote all the feelings he had and the things he did after that break-up really well, how Monta was worried, and even Riku and Suzuna came over, and then of course Hiruma. Since he's my absolute favourite, I'm quite glad he jacked the story, even though I'm curious as to how Musashi would have handled it as well. Love how you write him, all cursing, but still being nice, somehow, and saving Sena, and kicking that yui in the face, and listening to him, and aaaww.
Thank you for this wonderful story. :)

Your a brilliant writer that somehow manages to capture emotions and feels and portray them to us the readers, and you make those feelings come alive in us drawing us in further into the mix of feelings and then the next thing you know, you have tears in your eyes which was such a heart wrenching thing because I'm emotionally stunted and you have just pulled at my heart strings and I can't even get mad because I'm still feeling for Sena and being miserable but I'm still happy with the promise that Youichi is there for him, that at one phone call he has run to Sena's aid... That he will make it better, Sena will be fixed, but he will always have those cracks and the mere IDEA that a person can reduce you to this is so soul destroying. God, I don't even know what to put in this review, I can't even describe the emotions I am feeling right now, I know I want more though, not of the horrible 'never-fall-in-love-so-people-can't-hurt-you' but the very human nature you seem to easily write out, it bewilders me, I can't even create a drabble. So I will put on my big girl pants, eat some chocolate wipe my eyes and carry on, because what else do you do after reading this emotionally charge story.

lol, poor Mushashi. Only Hiruma would steal even from a friend. But I think it turned out quite nicely with Hiruma. (To be honest, for a while I thought 'Honjo-san' was Taka... my bad...) Anyway, I think this is an amazing fic! So realistic! (and sad T.T) Not to mention that last line! Loved it!

Loved it :)