really you make naruto a emo asshole

really you give them swords wtf you should say fuck them and only have naruto with a sword and kido

why you give those faggots swords they should stay weak like the dumbasses they are only naruto should have sword and not those 2 idiots and wtf makeing naruto like emo fag with a god complex thats fucked up

Shit

Yeah trying to read... this and it caught my attention at first but it seems heavily rushed and also it seems horribly cliché. Your characters all are based off of the forms of garbage I seen on fanfiction such as power hungry sasuke, civilian council which mind you doesn't really exist, and then you have the gall to give sasuke and sakura powers just off the fly like that. I will continue reading to see if the story redeems it self but honestly I don't see that happening.
Also please work on structure, were on chapter two and not even a hint of original plot has been seen to my eyes.

Seriously? You're giving him a cross between Sharingan and Byakugan in the second chapter? The Mangekyo even? Wow. Oh hell no!

And Sakura gaining shinigami powers too?

good chapter update soon

Then I guess if Sosake Aizen isn't the previous owner then he's the most infamous owner of naruto's zanpacktou

not bad really, this story is pretty good and while they were overpowered to begin with you tend to wonder how powerful they are after 3 years. Kushina's excuse is politic's basically. Anyway, hope you kill her or at least maim her as a reminder for the rest of her life.

I have read a few reviews saying you bash a lot, but you didn't really bash to much like most people.

Hopefully after this you show a little more development cause I am assuming you rushed from the wave scene to this point for a reason.

i really wanted to give this story a chance. seriously i did the concept is very good, i mean that. i always wanted to read a fic that had naruto using aizen's sword and him being god like HOWEVER you threw the story into the blender when you put so much bashing in it. don't get me wrong i love bashing, but bashing in every other sentence is a real put off. the time you take to bash character could instead be used to add more to the story itself. which brings me to the next problem RUSHED! this story feels more like a summary of what happened than an actual story. you skip only to key parts of the story with hardly any content on what happened between the two key parts. i really can't put into words how rushed worker is like however read from top authors like zagger the bloody angel and you'll see the difference.

We knew you well Kus-.. Actually.. we only knew you for a chapter or two.. So it really doesn't matter if you die Kushina.

A GRATE CHAPTER.

HOPE TO READ MORE SOON.

That was awsome! I can not wait to see Naruto's battle with Kushina. I also like how you utterly destroyed Konoha. Keep up the good work!

ironic and unexpected come to mind when being trained by the previous wielder of Naruto's zanpackto.

sweet