Reviews for The New Firebreather
sarahlampkin49 chapter 3 . 7/21/2019
I love this chapter when are you going to make more of it!
Guest chapter 3 . 11/10/2018
It really wouldn't be that difficult to tweak Orihime into a half-Quincy.

From a Bleach-verse with a female Ichigo. One of Orihimes parents was an untrained Quincy, a survivor of the Shinigami purge, like Ichigo's mother.

And unlike Uryu there was no one left to teach them. Being more spiritually attuned they were more likely to end up on a Hollow's menu for dinner.

As happened to Ichigo's mother and Orihime's brother.

THIS Orihime may have gotten her fairies through exposure to Ichigo Reietsu, consider it a mutation.

But the rest of her skills she learned from Uryu.

Ended up in the R&V-verse through a malfunctioning Dengan(?), think that was the term for those travel tunnels in Bleach.

Anyway, she really has no reason to go back to her Bleach-verse.

Sure, she might miss her friends (unless something happened to them), but she has no family left, nor a love interest, which she seems to have found in Shinji.

So why would she want to go back?

As for Shinji, based on the scent comments it sounds like he's Moka's half-brother, through her father. Although, rather than half-vampire you just might want to use the term dhampire.

Lastly, seeing how Moka's mother claim to fame was dealing with Dracula/Alucard, sounds like she was Belloc's companion for that fight.

Could lead to some interesting hijinks if the old timers made an agreement to have their offspring get hitched.

Cue crying Kurumu and blushing Moka and Tsukune.

Mizore seems to be disassociating herself from Tsukune and may thus end up with someone else.

You could take a page from "Dreaming of the Phoenix" and their "Naruto -Life as a Devil" and having a multiversal variant of Shinji (?), a High Class Devil, offering her a spot in his Peerage.

A Bishop with proper CQC training could work. Ice Armour a la the X-Man Iceman for protection, yet using ice claws for anyone trying to engage in HtH. (As she's shown a fondness for that claw tactic iirc, she just lacks the proper training to maximize its effectiveness. Lion or Tiger based Wushu should work nicely.)

Long and Mid range, rather similar to Akitsu I suspect.
Currahee506 chapter 3 . 9/3/2018
Update please
StrongGuy159 chapter 3 . 6/20/2018
Cool 3 chapters continue please.
xavier chapter 3 . 4/24/2018
make more
Bloom Stella vampire firestar chapter 1 . 10/6/2015
Make more plz :) :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
chris kidder chapter 3 . 3/8/2015
keep on writing
Zak saturday 1 chapter 3 . 3/6/2015
Update soon please
Neo-Devil chapter 3 . 3/4/2015
make a fic in which Jetstream Sam From Metal Gear Rising Trains Shinji ikari
cegi85 chapter 3 . 12/2/2014
MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/11/2014
seriously update this
nathan.lee.18062533 chapter 3 . 9/25/2014
can you please make more chapters
Red Diz chapter 3 . 5/28/2014
This is a grate story but why are you giveing up. I hate it when somen gives up on a good story. Please try to work on it again I would like to know what happens next. Update soon!
Jose19 chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
I have one question for this story will Tsukune have a Harem for this story or will this be a single pairing story because I want to know.
blueriverwolf chapter 3 . 8/21/2013
Come on bro its been a year since you've posted anything :(
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