rogue smirking at her boyfriend remy i am going to tan my demon's ass if he doesn't stop flirting with looking at other women

Hi,

Okay, this was utterly amazing! Definitely the best yet, it summed them up in such simplistic terms! I loved it, especially the last line. It is so true!

~Paige

wow i like that :)

Woooooow! This is so strong; so tightly woven, it nearly hurts to read that last line! GLomp! Christmas cookies? This is amazing.

Wish I was eloquent enough to describe WHY this scene hooks itself in my skin and tugs there. There is a multitude of secrets written between these lines—and it's a bit haunting. The glaring line between Rogue: good, innocent, pure, hurting; and Gambit: bad, tainted, filthy, hurting, is really defined in this piece. Light and Dark. White and Black. Angel and Demon. Astounding.

*Gasp!*

YOU wrote a stand alone Romy drabble? Shock of all shocks.

Well, you know me, all of your drabbles are just so amazing. I love this one too. ;)

Your writing is so powerful. In so few words, you really get a message across to us. You've become really good at showing the contrast between Rogue and Remy and capturing that special irony that permeates their relationship (one of the reasons I love them together). Your stories are amazing, and I've been following some of them for a while (I'll try to review more, but sometimes short chapters don't really leave me much to say).

Anyways, just wanted to let you know that I've become a big fan of your writing in the past few weeks. Keep it up!

ok I mean this as constructively as possible but this is more a poem than a story there is no clear plot no clear conflict characterization or even clear characters