Just finished reading through both Semper Furor and Victoria, one of the best fanfictions I've ever read by far.

A few others have mentioned this in other reviews but there does not seem to be a story named Semper Vitae, is it posted somewhere else?

Regardless thank you for writing and posting such an amazing series!

Even better than the first story. Can't find semper vitae unfortunately

Definitely one of the best Fanfics I've read! It's great how you made the situations very believable and no chapter felt dragged out. I also like how you added a bit of worldbuilding by mentioning the situation back on Terra every now and then.

Just read through Semper Victoria and Semper Furor and my god, what a fantastic story. I love how rich you've made the setting, how this ISN'T some blind "The natives are blameless" nor is it "humans are supreme", but you take the time to establish everyone's legitimate reasons for doing what they do. The good, the bad, the ugly, it's all there, and it's great.

It's really tragic things turned out the way they did, with the goddess lashing out and basically cutting off even a chance of peace at its knees. In the face of that things turned out as well as they could, even the natives population was decimated yet again. But hey, on the bright side at least the humans get to save their species.

That being said, I don't see Semper Vitae on your profile. Do you have it posted somewhere else?

Great story

Another excellent story following on from Semper Victoria. I definitely think that your stories are some of, if not the best Avatar fan fics I've seen. I really like that, unlike other fics, this doesn't just jump to the 'all the Na'vi' are right and Humans are incompetent and in the wrong. There is both good and bad decisions made by both parties and I feel like that this is so much more natural and 'realistic' than other fics. Can't wait to read more of your work and hope you keep up the good work.

This one is/was just as good as the first part.

So we got a proto ONI and Earth is about to get unified. If/When we crack FTL travel the na'vi are vetting stomped, instead of reinforcements arriving every 1-3 years they could get thousands in a few months

Fuck. Nice. Holy Hell. Fucking Nice.

And on to your sequel. So far the writing is consistent, characters continuesly being developed and it's nice to see some new faces, let's hope this work is as good as your last.
- Jesse

Well, I'm not sure I like were this is going. I mean its a good story but the UEG is worrisome.

So what conflict was Jake talking about? WWIII, Vietnam?

I've always wondered if it was a
PLot hole or it was just something put in there to test people's intelligence, butt did the never consider that the flying mountains of pandora might just be full of unobtanium? And entire mountain range of rocks bigger than the skyscrapers of earth during that time just hovering there atop the magnetic vortex of the North Pole. Only iron and superconductors hover in magnetic fields.
Company man wants to talk bottom line? Tell him to take a look.
Also, tunnel borers. A very basic piece of mining equipment for the last fifty years NOW I can only imagine what might
Be done with them in 22-whatever it was. South America uses 200 ft diameter tunnelers with inbuilt processing facilities to extract ores from mountains at an industrial rate and America uses them for mine shafts, subway tunnels and the Nevada nuclear repository.
Sumply bringing a few of these in to replace the strip mining equipment would mean that the could ignore the navi entirely and mine unobtanium even faster!

Good story though.

I was hoping Jake would bring up how the tree basically mind raped all those kids- including their son- into throwing themselves into a bloodbath, and for no reason. ‘sigh’

I wonder when and if the Na’vi will finally twig that their goddess is manipulating their own children into starting another bloody massacre. You would think they’d question how much the world brain really loves them.