I really, really liked this! Such a wonderful story! Your way of describing and explaining magic, in general, but particularly Scorpius' magic, is very interesting and kind of beautiful. I also really liked how you portray Scorpius and Albus, and their relation. You have given them very deep and complex personalities; I grew fond of them both quickly. It's a bit surreal, with the kidnappings and the very strong magic, but it was a pleasure to read something so different. Scorpius' eyes is a nice touch, too.
Thank you for this extraordinary little piece of art!

So so so good! I can’t understand why there aren’t more views, but excellent story! I enjoyed the pace, time skips, and realistic portrayal of both men. Thanks!

This is so good! I love the categorizations of both of them. Scorpius seems to have a long way to go to accepting himself but I have no doubt that he'd get there-no doubt with Albus staring in amazement at his side.

This is the best I've ever read. Amazing. Magnificent. AND MERLIN SCORPIUS I DO NOT KNOW WHETHER TO CRY OR SWOON OR SCREAM "I FEEL YOU!"

I listen to Demon by Imagine Dragons while reading this, and it's very, very fitting.

Wow. that was something new. hilarious and very entertaining.

This is so twisted, I feel like I'm in love.

I've read over 10 Scorbus fics in the past few days and I honestly like your story and specifically your portrayal of Scorpius the best. I'm reading this again.

That was truly one of the most enchanting pieces I've ever read, and I haven't even read the Harry Potter series. The relationship between Scorpius and Albus was so endearing, and the plot was very complex. I loved the intricate details and I'm impressed by the diction you used. I have to admitted that I caught myself blushing and squealing quite a bit. Well done.

Oh my goodness this story was one of the best Albus x Scorpius books I've read. I love that you left lots to the imagination, but I do wish there was maybe a one-shot or something explaining Albus's reaction to Scorpius' enhanced magic ability and such. Not to mention all the obliviates performed on poor Albus.

OMG! You have written a master peice...I'm so In love with your writing skill and specially the way you have describe Scorpious!you should have been a prffesional Writer I'm sure JK Rowling herself would be so proud of you the again I Looooooooooveeeee Ittttt sooooooooooooooooooo much keep writing an . Say Blessed

Seventh year Albus is my favorite. He figured out the best way to deal with the rumours.

Oh Albus. He tries so hard to get his way. I tried to find your Japanese saying, but your own fic was the closest I got.

I think you got it spot on. They feel like eleven year-olds when they think, the both of them. And there are so many ways of viewing Malfoy's future that most of them can be right. I think most of us see the calm and composed Malfoy as a facade. You have an original twist to the connection between Albus and Scorpius and to their sorting. It's a good twist. The end there was cringe-worthy. Poor Albus! The only way he can remedy that is to grow up and embrace his love now! I expect you to also show the turning point between twelve when you think like your parents and seventeen when you think like yourself.

Really great story. It had me entranced the entire time.

~Frosty

Brilliant! This's the best albius fic I ever read 3 Love Al & Scor!