Rico and Skipper are making their way home, Private is stuck with a spoiled brat, and Kowalski's decently well off with the monkeys. I wonder...

Wow. But it kind of cut off at the end.

Tense, very tense.

Oh no! Where have they gone? How can they get together again?

This is in the top ten most original stories so far, it's very cool!

Very good Story! xD

You have to continue!

It's Really good! ;)

Wow! This is excellent. I can totally see this conversation going on. They sound like real foxes, and everything. Snowfire, and her family sound so lovely. I love how you described their movements. They sound so concrete, and believable.

uhhh! next chapter! next chapter! i'm so exited! wanna know what happens next! go on like that, i loooove it!

I like the name Fluffy! Wow. This is a great story in which I hope you choose to continue.

Oh, Wow. She is a spoiled little thing isn't she? I can see why he would be worried. You did perfect. I loved hwo the rich jerks looked. They seemed like the type to get what thye want. Congrats on the new chapter. It was lovely.

Yep. I know how those sorts of fathers can be. Never letting their daughters go. That is a neat little add in. I love how She is flying over the shadow of Skipper. So is she the animal to stay with her?

Whew. That was one dedicated hunter. Good thing Rico lost him. I cannot stand hunters like that. To where they keep chasing them, even after they get startled. Well, I'm not a fan of hunters at all. Still, it's great that he found her.

Wow! That was a very awesome chapter. I love the way the monkeys were acting all ferocious, at first. I can hardly imagine how scary it must be to have the police chase you with a dog noose. You did a great job painting a picture for the swamp. The words made it sound so detailed. I could imagine it in my mind.

ricooo! bad blowhole he scared private ;_; hope they'll be together again. can't wait for the next fanfic is great!keep up.

Eeeeeeep! I can't believe it. Of all the no good tricks. I knew Blowhole would do something pshycotic. he's such a lunatic! Poor little Private. I feel so awful for the little guy. Also I feel bad for the others as well. They were brothers, friends, and soldiers together. I can hardly wait to see what they go through. Love the chapter. It was magnificent. Can hardly wait for more. Keep up the good work.