Interesting!

this was great! loved it! and for reason, i can totally imagine zack being a thief!

I liked the idea, but everything happened so fast... in fourth chapter... well, parents death, zacks own three years, two years meeting... honey, they all need at least one chapter. Be patient, and your next story will be great n_n

i liked it, it could have been longer but it was really good and id like to see yuffiexreno

Just make sure to write MORE Zaqua.

*applause* Not bad. Not bad at all. Starts off sad as they really can be together and then you get to the happy ending. Zack should be lucky to have a woman like Aqua.

Anyway, for pairings to write about, you could always go with Cloud x Tifa, Leon x Aerith, or even the standard Sora x Kairi.