| Reviews for Book One: The Alchemist |
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TrekkieNerdJoshua chapter 32 . 8/20 So where's the rest of the series? This is great, but I want more! |
ej-83 chapter 32 . 3/13 nice..i wonder what will happen in the next sequel..am curious if they can manage to remove the horcrux..n if their father is still alive or not..keep up the good work |
That2-one3-girl4 chapter 18 . 2/15 It's disgusting to feel any sort of satisfaction from belittling a 11 year old boy when you're a grown ass man. |
105 chapter 32 . 6/8/2019 Woah! It's a good read! And with a satisfying ending. Plus, the things with Draco, I really love it. Bcs you know, I like Draco as a character and really feel for hm. The only lacking thing is... MUSTANG'S ABSENCE XD I'm hopeless, I know. Anyway, thanks for writing this! |
Silvae Song chapter 32 . 7/31/2018 This is beautiful! I love this story! The Slytherin was Roy, right? Man, you're a genius! Are you planning on a sequel? You wrote this quite a while ago. Any plans? I've got some ideas, if you want to hash them out! |
lunaatje123 chapter 32 . 7/15/2018 I'm usually not one for FMA/HP crossovers set in the HP universe, but yours managed to pleasantly surprise me. You did a good job on fitting alchemy and the Elrics in and I generally liked the changes you made to their situation to help that fit along. I would have liked it if you had managed to include Mustang, his team and Hughes, but I can't really see how you could havd gone about it. So leaving them out probably was the right decision. Thank you for the story! |
Sylphrena33 chapter 18 . 4/11/2018 Great chapter. :) I love the friendship between Draco, Ed, and Harry. I think the change in Draco's character makes perfect sense too, especially if it happens this early on in the story. |
Spartansneverdie312 chapter 32 . 2/24/2018 will you mqke a second part? because this is an epic story! |
seheronelves chapter 32 . 9/11/2017 Screaming because I love this so much. Like seriously, I've read several crossovers but this one was quite different from all of them. It was amazing, so well written, and I loved the balance between the changes made to the characters and their retained personalities. The story itself was wonderful, the changes you made to it were fun and awesome to read about. I think you did a great job with showing us "what if this or that happened instead" and I honestly just love this. Hands down one of my favorites so far |
Kyonarai chapter 1 . 9/8/2017 I really enjoyed this. One of the best HP/FMA crossovers I've read to date. I really like how alchemy impacted the story, and helped resolve many issues within the series, without seeming too over-powered. |
ElizabethBathog chapter 32 . 10/27/2016 This was AWESOME! Loved the ideas! Thank you for writing it and i hope there is a sequel! :D |
SoulMore chapter 32 . 4/15/2016 FAN!~ |
Charles Attwater chapter 32 . 3/9/2016 really good! please write the sequel! |
Catter Midnightfall chapter 32 . 3/5/2016 This book was amazing! I loved how you added a unique flair to the original book, with your own words and inserting the characters. It's also interesting how differently things turned out than in the first, but it's a nice type of interesting! Will there be a sequel? |
dianaanne chapter 31 . 11/26/2015 Any possibility you'll write the sequel and get the horcrux out of Harry as well as rid Remus of lycanthropy? |