That is such a shit place to end this.

Ahhhh! Kyouya! Hope he's alright also it's soo cool how u did the courtroom it felt like I would have been in an actual courtroom! Update soon!

I really like your fic and hope you decide to finish it. I want to know if Kyouya pulls through, is he and Haruhi finally get together. Please please finsh writing this fic. it's really good.

PPLLEEAASSEE! I know it has been over a year, but is this story still alive somewhere

Happy New Year! I noticed it's almost been a year since your last update, leaving us with the ultimate cliffhanger. I really hope you haven't abandoned this project, it's very captivating and well written. It's one of my favorite Kyouya/Haruhi stories on this site and I would love to see what happens to Kyouya, Haruhi, and the rest of the Host Club crew and what comeuppance Komatsuzawa receives.

Though life has a funny way of getting in the way sometimes, I truly hope you plan on continuing this story one day. Until then, I'll be patiently awaiting an updated story alert. Happy writing!

PS- Please don't kill off Kyouya, he's deserves a happy ending after all he's been through!

Agh! You can't leave it like that! I just read the whole story and I really want to know what happens! BTW, it's a great story - original and exciting:)

Omg I'm gonna CRYYYYYY D;

MORE! I will kill your family! Update! Now! Stupid cliffieeeeeeeeee! :'O

WHAAATTT! A cliffhanger? seriously? augh! do you know how long I have waited for an update? You should update really really soon! I try to squeeze in my work schedule (I read your fanfiction whenever I have breaks in our office) so you better update )

ahaha I don't mean to threat you...its just your story is VERY GRIPPING )

nooooooo...kyouya please don't die..i hate you if you make him die..(well, please don't believe that :) as i just love you more as you made this story more interesting)

p/s-yup, i do have a great vacation and i think you should have some too..but please finish up this story first.i hate it being on a hiatus..

Wahhhhh! Kyouya was SHOT!

Nice.

Hello.

I just plowed through all 12 chapters of that. My, it's been quite a long time since I've read anything on this site of significant length. That being said, this story is a page-turner. Well, it would be if it was made up of physical paper pages...

I love the format of the story, how it jumps around in time yet all makes sense and connects. Good job on making that work.

The characters have really grown up. In some ways, I don't want to think that any of them would turn out the way they have in your story, but I also can see where it could happen.

The plot line is driving, and the legal stuff seems plausible enough, not that I would know about any of that.

One of my favorite parts so far was when Honey said it was still easy to pick fun at the others. It suited him, and it really tied this futureverse to its canon beginnings. Plus, the dialogue prior to that was terribly awkward, which is always a plus. Lol.

I like Haruhi's undying determination, even after being attacked. It seems she's grown up the most, and it's an interesting transformation that you've made up for her. She's not innocent anymore, but it helps her to take crap and deal with the cut-throat world she's in.

Your Kyoya is very intriguing. I like that you give him so much depth, even though he still does idiotic things. The scenes with his mom are just heartbreaking. I hate him for what he did with Haruhi, but I can totally understand why he did it. And now that he's been shot, I can forgive him perhaps. (Lol, I'm a terrrible person. XD) I kind of like outlaw-Kyo-chan. Heh heh. But really, despite his stupidity, I love how you've developed his character.

And, I'm not gonna lie, when he put that arm around Haruhi and said what he did, my insides died a bit. In a good way. He's so cute. .

While I'm rambling I might as well drop some constructive criticism... There are some minor spelling/grammar issues scattered throughout. There's nothing too terrible, though, otherwise I would have stopped reading a while ago. I know it must be hard to get everything perfect on the device you seem to be working with, so it's whatever.

At first this story seemed a bit promiscuous for my taste, but you deal with the subjects delicately enough, I think. These sort of things really happen to real people all the time, so that's how I justified reading on. Plus, you know, I wanted to know what happened!

Anyways, I'm sorry if any/all of that doesn't make sense. I hope my compliments actually seem like compliments...

I look forward to your next update, and thanks for drawing my interest with your story.

-Skye

Wow, talk about a cliffhanger. Poor Kyouya. Just when things are starting to look up, something even worse brings him back down. These two deserve a happy ending after all they've been through so please don't kill him off! Can't wait to see the next installment. Update soon!

GRAAAAAAAAAGHHHHHHHH.

MASSIVE SPASM. HELLO.

Secret police MY ASS. Pfft. So angryyyyyy. I'm going to refer to Akira as Akira-bastard from now on, thanks. McCoy too now has the -bastard suffix though I don't know why I didn't add it earlier.

And I was so happy when Kyoya was acquitted. And then the entire conversation with "Take care of it" and the happy feeling was gone. Poof. I could just feel the... harm-to-Kyoya-in-some-form coming.

-siiiiiigh- Anyway... Yeah. I'll stop spazzing out and rest now. I'm sick too so I know how you're feeling. Let's get well soon, kay?