Nooooooooooo! How can you do this to me?! I knew Raph died, I knew it! But dang it!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Fuckin' made me cry... Why did my friend make me read this?!

I'm crying right now. Well done, my heartstrings are very hard to play usually.

Wait! Is this how it ends?! Q_Q I wasn't expecting a character death. My eyes are flooding over. Raphael come back! What is your family going to do without you? My heart hurts!

Good job with writing this story! I like your writing style!

Gosh this story always rips my heart out. I don't know why but I keep coming accross it and rereading it and it nearly kills me everytime!

I thought something was going on. Then you laid it on me and I cried. I mean wow.
I had to read it twice after I found out the storyline.

i wish i could cry but my family are here and they will wonder why I'm crying...They don't understand these things :'(

Gosh I can't take this! O_O

I'm gonna go read some Raphie fic to ease this off..

I wish someone'd do a Raphie the ghost fic.. that'd be awesome *0*

You.. KILLED my Raphiiiiiie TT_TT

And why are they taking it so goddamn easily? #_#

i kind of guessed that was gonna be the twist but i really enjoyed this story! (well, is 'enjoyed' the right word?) I'm actually crying right now... real tears are streaming down my cheeks! :'( anyway, great job with this story!

Jen

loving this so far!

Oh, this story is so sad! I hate it that Mikey thought Raph was alive when he really wasn't, and that the whole family is going through horrible, tragic times, but they really need to set things straight with each other. Hopefully Don and Leo won't have to bad of a fight when Leo gets back home.

Update soon, you're doing a great job with this story so far!

Whoa, I really liked that last bit what with the "silence" doing all the talking after Leo was just thinking about how he used to give Raph the silent treatment. I mean, it would be REALLY awful of Leo to just take off right now. Honestly!

I know, I SHOULD have reviewed chapter by chapter but I just blew through it instead (sorry!).

So I was kind of getting weirded out by Don and Leo's actions, but figured something was up with Raph. Of course, I'm a retard and thought he was walking around without a head or something really totally bizarre! Like, he could have been on Mr. Ripley's Believe It or Not! But this makes much more sense and it's so sad! I don't know if you've thought of a companion piece but I wouldn't mind seeing more on how Don and Leo interacted throughout the whole ordeal. Just a suggestion! ;)

Ah, poor Mikey. That would be pretty awful. And Poor Leo and Don. And Raph. Poor EVERYONE. Anyway, I'm totally anxious to see an update and how things go at the Lair! :)

I KNEW IT!

I knew it the second I saw Donnie's reaction to Mikey telling him that he'd talked to Raph when he'd first woken up! I knew he was dead!

You know, I need to stop thinking of the most crazy possible plot-twists imaginable, I never get those amazing UBERSURPRIZED moments anymore...I love those moments, they're my favorite...

*goes to a corner and pouts like a three-year-old*

bee-tee-dubs, that part where Leo is telling Raph that he needs him made me cry. That was awesome!

~ash