Reviews for Criminality
Heartifystars chapter 1 . 7/25
This was very fun to read! Though I wish that there was more chapters outlining how Andrew got his Hogwarts letter and finding Harry at Hogwarts too...
silvaliana23 chapter 1 . 2/29
I am loving this so far I am hopping you can add a chapter,i wanna see when he gets his letter at hogwarts and when he sees Harry there too. I was also hopping they can become friends after coming back in would be a great u update soon.
MissBrunetteBarbie chapter 1 . 2/15
I love outsider's POV and this was simoly ohenomenal. Thank you for such a great fic
Grumpr chapter 1 . 1/6
Love this! It's really cool to get an outsider's pov on Harry (and a Muggle too) and I absolutely love how Andrew is probably a wizard too, even if he doesn't know it yet. Perhaps in a few years he'll have a story to tell about Harry Potter saving him from bullies! Thanks for writing and sharing! :)
siobhan.22 chapter 1 . 12/26/2018
Great story
YaoiHellian chapter 1 . 9/4/2018
Cute, simply, and makes you want to read more. Nice story hun, thank you for writing.
l'inconnue chapter 1 . 5/19/2018
this was a delight from start to finish, it hit so many good outsider pov beats - rumours ("ralphie fisher said"), mistaking a wand for a gun, and that twist at the end... what a good fic
Murkatroyd chapter 1 . 4/18/2018
This could fit right neatly into canon as we know it. It's nice, well-written, and only as long as it needs to be. I'm glad I've read it. Well done.
SmilingRoses chapter 1 . 1/14/2018
I'm so glad I came across this fic! This was great, would love to read more like this! Thanks for sharing your writing with us :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2017
Sweet little fic.
darklightuk chapter 1 . 6/21/2017
Short and direct.
A nice and surprising read on a Wednesday afternoon. I don't typically post on FF but just felt you should have some thanks for the story here. Would love to see something more from you, but thats your choice.
TTFN
purpleradiance chapter 1 . 2/5/2017
Loved it!
LittleMissInsomnia chapter 1 . 8/25/2016
I really liked this story! You should do a sequel - with Andrew getting his letter, then meeting Harry at Hogwarts or somethin'. :)
A.Tigerose chapter 1 . 7/11/2016
sequel? really good i want to know more
ME chapter 1 . 6/23/2016
So Andrew's a wizard! That's cool!
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