Reviews for This One–Track Mind
atrt7900 chapter 1 . 11/26/2018
I think I can recall reading this when I was 10, and at the time, I never had the chance to appreciate the witty dialogue here or Ruby's voice in general. But after stumbling across here so many years later, I legit can't stop laughing because Ruby's inner monologues are /so him/. Absolutely loved it.

(Also can I comment on "of course Blue would have a touch-screen phone, the latest fashion in technology, as expected from her," compared from 2010 to 2018, I don't think a touch-screen phone is the "latest technology" anymore haha, comes to show how much time has passed)
AmethystHeart chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
Lol, my name is both of theirs combined: Amethyst!
x Cheetah x chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
AHHHH BEAUTIFUL
*THROWS SPARKLES*
Himawari Mii chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
I feel in love with this fic. Really. It's so fab! X3 (See what I did there? ;P)
TribalRose chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
Lol loved it Sapphire is hilarious
Raichu chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
I'm not a big fan of AU fics (even though I even wrote one...) but I enjoyed this one. You're characters are true to the originals and I like how you've rendered them in a high school setting.

Plus the ending is sweet!
timisnotmyname chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
i laughed so hard at Gold in this... great story!
RubyDOS chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
This is.. wow. The most accurate description of each character in High School. The explanation to everything is mind-blowing and I couldn't ask for a better story.
paper parasols chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
this might just be my favorite RubySapphire story. you capture everyone perfectly and this is going into my favorites because it's that good :)
roats chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
awwww... :3 this is sooooo cute! I've been recently fanshipping this couple, and by so far, this is one of the best I've ever read :) continue with this amazing work!

- roats
Zino chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Wow, absolutely best High School Pokémon fic, I've ever read. Your style is so great and you got the characters nailed down perfectly! I really, really enjoyed this. :D
beautifly92 chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
Awwww SO SWEET! :D
Emasaur chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
Haaaave I ever told you I love reading stories you write involving Ruby? Because you capture him so wonderfully and I end up smiling during the whole read. :

This was amazing.
ohlookrandom chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
I love it I love it I love it I love it. It is literally THE best Franticshipping story I've read. :)
Kimba616 chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
I love how your write Ruby's thoughts. He's one of the more tough ones to write for, but this whole thing was extremely in character and so funny! Much love! :]
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